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    working on a book dummy - need some feedback for the cover design

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      doro_thea last edited by

      hi, thank you everyone for your feedback! here is the newest version. If there is anything still jumping out at you that needs fixing or could be nicer differently, please point it out to me. Cover_zirkus_final.jpg

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        KaraDaniel @doro_thea last edited by

        @doro_thea really cool! Love this!

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          doro_thea @KaraDaniel last edited by

          @KaraDaniel thank you!

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            Melissa_Bailey @doro_thea last edited by

            @doro_thea looking really good! The elephant reads MUCH clearer -- one tiny thing you might want to look at is the color of the elephant's shorts. They're still disappearing into the background, which isn't happening to any of the other characters. But overall, two thumbs up!

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              doro_thea @Melissa_Bailey last edited by

              @Melissa-Bailey-0 thanks for pointing that out again. I saw it and somehow couldn't muster the energy still to change it and said to myself:" oh it is not that bad". But it was good to see that you picked it up straight away, so here is the hopefully final update. Zirkus.jpg

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