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    • erinrew
      erinrew last edited by

      Looking for feedback on my WIP. Struggling to think of personal articles that will elude to my Yeti’s personality.

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      • lpetiti
        lpetiti last edited by

        What sort of personality does your Yeti have?

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        • Asyas_illos
          Asyas_illos last edited by

          Your yetis home looks like it could use a birdhouse or feeder? But it would help to think of a personality for your yeti

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          • Cayleen
            Cayleen @erinrew last edited by

            @erinrew Baking utensils decorating the exterior? Like a whisk door handle or muffin cup planters? Or maybe they have a little tea garden with cutesy labels and tea pot planters?

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            • Cayleen
              Cayleen @Cayleen last edited by

              Oh, I see little garden there! Hmm, what about zooming in on the house a bit and having hanging teapot planters around the front door, full of different tea plants?

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              • erinrew
                erinrew @lpetiti last edited by

                He is a gentle soul who likes to bake and drink tea.

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                • erinrew
                  erinrew @Asyas_illos last edited by

                  @Asyas_illos I like this idea. Thank you.

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                  • erinrew
                    erinrew @Cayleen last edited by

                    @Cayleen Love you’re ideas! Thank you for the suggestions. 😊

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                    • erinrew
                      erinrew last edited by

                      Does anyone else get nervous when you start to add color? I need to figure out a process to help me with my color anxiety.

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                      • Asyas_illos
                        Asyas_illos @erinrew last edited by

                        @erinrew yes! I actually made a comment to @Lee-White on Instagram earlier today about his book mobile, he had one in color and one just in value like sepia colored and I said I needed to do this because I love so many images in value before they even get color I hadn’t even thought to make duplicates keep one in sketch or value and then another in color! Or just duplicate to try different color schemes!

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                        • Jacy13
                          Jacy13 @erinrew last edited by

                          @erinrew It's looking great! I'm loving the purple in the sky. It looks peaceful 🙂

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                          • erinrew
                            erinrew @Asyas_illos last edited by

                            @Asyas_illos Good idea... unfortunately I did not do that with this one, but so think I will start.

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                            • erinrew
                              erinrew @Jacy13 last edited by

                              @Jacy13 Thank you Jacy. I work on it a little bit at a time to help cope with my nervousness in laying down color. Kind of like dipping your toe in a cold pool. 😂

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                              • erinrew
                                erinrew last edited by

                                This is my latest version. What’s working, what’s not? Thanks in advance.

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                                • ambiirae
                                  ambiirae @erinrew last edited by

                                  @erinrew I really love the concept and the color of the sky plus the smoke but I feel the wood colors and house colors are too muted. I find I want to look at the sky and smoke more than the house

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                                  • Asyas_illos
                                    Asyas_illos last edited by

                                    I agree with @ambiirae there’s so much contrast in the background I feel like you should bring some of that darkness forward a little

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                                    • K.Flagg
                                      K.Flagg last edited by

                                      I love the smoke design! I would lighten the background instead of darkening the foreground. If you darken the foreground it will be to saturated I think.

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                                      • Asyas_illos
                                        Asyas_illos @K.Flagg last edited by

                                        @K-Flagg oh yah even better

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                                        • erinrew
                                          erinrew last edited by

                                          I lightened the sky a bit. I don’t want to go to light with it, but is this better?

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                                          • Asyas_illos
                                            Asyas_illos last edited by

                                            Yes I think it looks better with that little difference!and I just love the smoke detail, beautiful.

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