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    • Asyas_illos
      Asyas_illos last edited by

      Well what time of day is it? Are the lights on necessary? Or maybe add a second thinner layer o glow? What program are you using?

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      • Asyas_illos
        Asyas_illos last edited by

        Also I love that your mailbox is up in the tree and it has owl deliveries😉

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        • Cayleen
          Cayleen @Asyas_illos last edited by

          @Asyas_illos Affinity. I liked the idea of having a cozy glow, so I guess it would be dusk or night. But the background is light so the house shows up...So many things to balance! lol. Thankfully we're here to learn 🙂 .

          The lights are on different layers, so I can tone them down or take them right out.

          Toned down:
          yeti house mid light.jpg

          No lights:
          yeti house no light.jpg

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          • Asyas_illos
            Asyas_illos @Cayleen last edited by

            @Cayleen maybe try giving them a more orange glow? It would complement the blue a little more I think, but I do like the lights on version better

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              Asyas_illos @Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

              @Asyas_illos I have a lot to learn about lighting myself, But I think a darker atmosphere would also make this stand out more, but overall a great image!

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              • K.Flagg
                K.Flagg last edited by

                @Cayleen said in Yeti House Feedback:

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                I like the warm lights, maybe push the warm with more yellow and a little orange? I tried adding it so you can see what I mean. Hopefully that is okay.

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                K.Flagg

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                • Cayleen
                  Cayleen @K.Flagg last edited by

                  @K-Flagg Fantastic, thank you!

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                  • erinrew
                    erinrew last edited by erinrew

                    Very cute, Love the owl post!

                    The tree coming out of the roof in the front reads a little strange and I really can’t tell what the three ladle looking things are or what the barrels contain, but that is mostly due to resolution issues.

                    Also, I like the warmer lights that @K-Flagg recommended. It makes the home look very inviting.

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                    • K.Flagg
                      K.Flagg last edited by

                      This will match your Yeti design really well! I also love the mail box in the tree with the owl!

                      K.Flagg

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                      • Cayleen
                        Cayleen @erinrew last edited by

                        @erinrew Thank you! Yeah, that tree bugs me too. It feels a little naked/unbalanced without it, though. I’ll play around with it. Thanks!

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