Treasure Troll - Fairy Tale Traveller WIP

[Miranda Branley]

Hi there, I've never done a turn around! I have so many questions! I'm wondering what you see in hierarchy or what you see first and if there's anything that is competing with each other? Also, I wrote a little paragraph explaining my character. I hope it makes sense. And how is my character consistency? I know it's just a sketch, but I'm really worried about it! For the back of my character, I'm showing the back of the treasure trunk, which is boring bleh. So I wanted to make it interesting and thought maybe if the trunk had holes where a mouth be and the hinges being eyes, I could make it look like a face! Lol. Hopefully that wouldn't be off putting. Thanks for reading and taking a look!

[Miranda Branley]

Omg I just facepalmed myself. I just reread the directions and forgot to make my character feel more naive. I was so worried about making them resilient looking. I’ll have to see what I can do. 🥲

[Miranda Branley]

Also! The paragraph won’t be staying there, I put it there just for now!

[Kim Rosenlof]

I like the idea of a treasure troll. I also like the hair! Very nice!

[Asyas_illos]

I noticed you have your front and back poses straight on when they should be 3/4 view like your walking pose. This may help with your back pose and seeing only trunk. I really love this concept though and thrill it’s a cute character!

[Miranda Branley]

@Kim-Rosenlof Thank you!