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      Tamisha SVS OG last edited by

      So far so good. What are your thoughts?crow.jpg

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      • Niels
        Niels last edited by

        I like it! Really interested in the other poses, and how he would go on an adventure.

        One question though; how does the backpack in combination with the scythe work? The part on his shoulder suggests the backpack is smaller than currently drawn? Really like the idea of him bringing lunch in the form of worms.

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        • K.Flagg
          K.Flagg last edited by

          I love him!

          K.Flagg

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            Tamisha SVS OG @Niels last edited by

            @Niels Gonna rework the backpack and work on some poses next. Thanks for the feedback.

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              Tamisha SVS OG @K.Flagg last edited by

              @K-Flagg Thank you!

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                Lorna H last edited by

                This wee crow is great! He's got a very endearing face, great, unusual idea to have a bird protagonist. I also love his super cute short dungarees and the wormy snack!

                I wondered if you could perhaps just lower the backpack so the scythe is able to ride over the top of it? At present the scythe looks a bit awkward as it appears to be sitting at an awkward angle between the crows head and the rucksack.

                Great sketch - love it!

                Lorna

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                • Tom Burchell
                  Tom Burchell last edited by

                  I love it!!!! Awesome looking character!! would say that the wing holding the scythe looks a little awkward and could be made a little clear. Like this pic (only ref I could find quickly haha).

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                      Tamisha SVS OG @Tom Burchell last edited by

                      @Tom-Burchell I'll give that a try. Thanks!

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                        Tamisha SVS OG @Lorna H last edited by

                        @Lorna-H Thank you. Yep, I have some work to do on that backpack.

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