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    • Tiffany Thomas
      Tiffany Thomas @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

      @Gary-Wilkinson I like the hose better, I think it has a much stronger relationship to the Harry image with the umbrella dripping water, I can totally imagine the duel they are having, lol. The flower idea is super cute and maybe can be used for one of the other characters. I also really like the colors, dark and moody violet, I think it works well with the character. Can't wait to see this one done!!!!

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      • Asyas_illos
        Asyas_illos @Tiffany Thomas last edited by

        @Tiffany-Thomas ooh I didn’t make that connection, good call!

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        • Fay
          Fay @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

          @Gary-Wilkinson Such a wonderful piece! πŸ˜ƒ I noticed his sleeve wasn’t resting/draping on his arm, is this intentional?

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          • Gary Wilkinson
            Gary Wilkinson @Fay last edited by Gary Wilkinson

            @Fay Not intentional, but hopefully when I add light and shadow it should clear up issues, though im sure there are many πŸ˜›

            A little step forward, not there yet, but trying to work out a nice color scheme for it as I go. I'm not 100% sure about the hose addition yet though as I want to keep the voldemort wand pose, but not sure its working so well with that prop. Thank you @Jeremy-Ross @Asyas_illos and @Tiffany-Thomas for your critiques about that.

            @Larue That's a lovely thing to hear πŸ™‚

            Voldemort 7b.jpg

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            • Tiffany Thomas
              Tiffany Thomas @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

              @Gary-Wilkinson Ohhh you could try a watering can (though it is less wand shaped), or a water balloon? Haha, trying to think of alternatives to the hose that still work with the Harry concept. It's looking good though, I still like the hose and I love that you've incorporated the house colors into each of the characters...so fun!

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              • Gary Wilkinson
                Gary Wilkinson last edited by Gary Wilkinson

                Not perfect, but i'm happy to leave it as it is and move onto another character.
                Voldemort sm.jpg

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                • Jeremy Ross
                  Jeremy Ross @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                  Hi @Gary-Wilkinson, amazing! I especially love the leaks in the hose, well done!

                  When you flipped the canvas, I noticed Tom’s name was mirrored; is that intentional?

                  Cheers!

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                  • Tiffany Thomas
                    Tiffany Thomas @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                    @Gary-Wilkinson I love it! Can't wait to see the next one!

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                    • Gary Wilkinson
                      Gary Wilkinson @Jeremy Ross last edited by

                      @Jeremy-Ross Nope not intentional.... I'll fix that up, nice catch πŸ˜ƒ

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                      • Melissa_Bailey
                        Melissa_Bailey @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                        @Gary-Wilkinson what is his mask made out of? With the rendering and no other visual clues, it looks like he might have put a plastic bag on his face?

                        Because this is a children's illustration, I'm sure that wasn't your intention, but if I had that mistaken impression, others could as well. Parents might not like to see that.

                        Just wanted to bring it to your attention and let you know what I saw.

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                        • Gary Wilkinson
                          Gary Wilkinson @Melissa_Bailey last edited by

                          @Melissa-Bailey-0 that's a good point. I was basing it off a beauty face mask, but perhaps it needs to be adjusted if people aren't seeing that

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                          • Asyas_illos
                            Asyas_illos last edited by

                            @Gary-Wilkinson I had thoughts about the mask as well. You could maybe do like an avocado mask LOL he could be eating a cucumber slice or they could be on the ground.

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                            • Gary Wilkinson
                              Gary Wilkinson @Asyas_illos last edited by

                              @Asyas_illos Some great ideas, love the cucumbers: πŸ˜ƒ

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                              • Jeremy Ross
                                Jeremy Ross @Melissa_Bailey last edited by

                                Great points @Melissa-Bailey-0! Another reason this forum is a gold mine! Sometimes others see what the artist does not.

                                One time, I drew a boy sitting at a table and incidentally drew the table leg directly under the boy. I completely missed it, but thankfully it was brought to my attention! πŸ˜…

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