Need your help - Sea Monster
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@Tyler-Koh Looks pretty cool so far, the top of the kraken coming out of the water looks abit weird though. If its coming up from bellow the surface I don't think you'll get water splashing away from the body at 45 degree angles. I would maybe check out pictures or videos of a whale tail or submarine breaching the surface of the water. I think you'll get more of a wave or ripple effect moving away from the body rather than a big splash.
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@s1h0k now that you mention it, it is kinda weird...
I'll fix it or maybe start a new but similar piece
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@Sabrina-Gosselin Yes! I totally agree, it definitely makes it more interesting!
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I think you have some amazing insight from previous commentors but I wanted to add that I really like this concept. It's fun! You've done a good job of exaggerating how large the giant sea creature is compared to the boat! I like that.
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@Melissa-Bailey-0 Yes! Thank you very much, the pieces of advice are great!
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@Lisa-Clark said in Need your help - Sea Monster:
ght from previous commentors but I wanted to add that I really like this concept. It's fun! You've done a good job of exaggerating how large the giant sea creature is compared to the boa
Thank you! Yep, I was trying to make the creature look bigger by adding the put there as a scale like you said.
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The fishing line lines are beautiful, especially with the similarities and contrast to the monster. It kind of makes me think that if the monster had never seen a fishing boat before, it might see the boat with the scary hooks like it's own idea of a sea monster. Lol
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@Sabrina-Gosselin
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@s1h0k
Like this? Or maybe this?
The wrapping around the boat concept is kinda hard to pull off with my lack of skills rn, so I just added a tentacle approaching the boat
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@Tyler-Koh really like the first one! If you want to heighten the tension, try moving the kraken’s mantle a little closer to the boat and see if that makes a difference.
Looking really good! Excited to see how this turns out!
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The perspective made the foreground tentacles look weird and POV was kinda hard to imagine so I came up with an underwater piece
