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    • demotlj
      demotlj SVS OG @Ellinor last edited by

      @Ellinor Thanks. I'm going to lengthen his feet a little to match the original better, but I'm thinking that because of his long feet and the way his legs bend, even if I had him sitting on a chair, all you'd see would be the bottom of his feet anyway.

      Laurie DeMott
      instagram.com/demotlj

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      • Oana
        Oana last edited by Oana

        What a funny little creature!! 🙂 ♥ I looked up the animal and noticed he is really small. .. so maybe, even if the assignment says "kindergarten stature" .. maybe you should consider his scale and keep him at a "smaller kindergartner" size? (on the stairs sketch he looks a bit too large!)
        The down the stairs action is really fun 🙂 but I am not so sure it counts as sitting, especially as the pose is difficult and you can't see much of the body? Maybe they ask for a sitting posture especially to make sure the body construction is coherent in all representations. Especially because of the particular shape of his legs, makes you wonder how does he look when seated.
        I think it is a very interesting and nice choice of character!

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        • demotlj
          demotlj SVS OG last edited by

          I guess I should have read the prompt better — it does say the sitting pose should be on the ground or chair so I guess I’ll need to ditch the laundry basket scene. It may be that this character’s legs won’t really allow him to sit in a chair which could be a serious obstacle for completing the prompt!

          Laurie DeMott
          instagram.com/demotlj

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          • Sbridges
            Sbridges last edited by

            I love the super long feet.

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            • Oana
              Oana @demotlj last edited by Oana

              @demotlj It sounds like a bit of a challenge but as he looks adorable standing, there should be a way he could sit in a plausible manner. The real animal seems to fold his legs under him, maybe something like this could work?
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              Or maybe even sitting on a chair, as he seems to have a little bit of butt behind the place the legs come out, then have the long part of the legs at a slight upward angle?…..

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              • demotlj
                demotlj SVS OG last edited by demotlj

                I went back to the drawing board and looked at the anatomy of the jerboa more closely. I then drew him sitting on a chair which might not be my final sitting pose but I wanted to get the anatomy right first. I think I can make it work better now. (Pretty horrible looking flavor of ice cream!)

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                Laurie DeMott
                instagram.com/demotlj

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                • demotlj
                  demotlj SVS OG last edited by

                  Here are some super quick thumbnails of back poses (so super quick you probably can’t tell what they are supposed to be.) I think I like #1, 2, and 13 best.

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                  Laurie DeMott
                  instagram.com/demotlj

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                  • Oana
                    Oana @demotlj last edited by

                    @demotlj oo I love these! And the sitting pose looks definitely better than my sitting on the floor suggestion

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                    • demotlj
                      demotlj SVS OG last edited by demotlj

                      Here’s my very rough drawing of a back view pose. I just saw that it says 3/4 view — do you think this counts as a 3/4 view? I could turn his face a little more. I should read the directions more carefully before I draw!

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                      Laurie DeMott
                      instagram.com/demotlj

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                      • Oana
                        Oana @demotlj last edited by

                        @demotlj I love the pose ! I think you could show a bit more of the face but I'm also interested in other opinions on that question, as it's a difficult angle (or at least my muskrat is having trouble with it). The assignment also says "1 neutral pose back, 3/4 view" but I've seen others using a fun pose like this instead of a "neutral" one and well... it looks more fun 🙂 I wonder if there is a standard for character sheets we are meant to master here or these are just loose guidelines?

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                        • demotlj
                          demotlj SVS OG @Oana last edited by

                          @Oana I think that's a good question. If you google "character sheet," some examples appear to be more model sheets in which the character is shown at several angles in order to provide consistency when drawing, but others include poses that convey the personality of the character as you might do if you were in the design stage. I'm thinking that the latter is what they are looking for in this contest since they described the personality of Arthur, something that wouldn't be necessary to know if you were just trying to develop a consistent form.

                          Fortunately for me, I'm just an amateur doing this for fun so if I do it wrong, it won't matter 🙂

                          Laurie DeMott
                          instagram.com/demotlj

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                          • demotlj
                            demotlj SVS OG last edited by

                            Just adding this because I know I like to see other people’s process. Still pretty sketchy — I was just deciding poses. Now I have to improve character consistency before finalizing.

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                            Laurie DeMott
                            instagram.com/demotlj

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                            • demotlj
                              demotlj SVS OG last edited by

                              Getting there. I thought about doing this in traditional watercolor but I have a lot going on in my schedule and don’t think I’ll have time so I’ll probably have to stay digital. I switched to pencil instead of ink because it makes it look less cartoony.

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                              Laurie DeMott
                              instagram.com/demotlj

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