June Contest - Albert the Fennec Complete (Critiques Welcome)
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LOVE! Great character and great design.
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Always a joy seeing your creations. This is no exception:)
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What a fantastic silhouette he has. And adorable too.
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I think i'm almost there with the poses, next onto refining and coloring
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A quick color study
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Love it!
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First color painting done, though if there are any suggestions I'd be happy to hear them to make it better.
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I don't have any suggestions - I think he's brilliant and I love the way his ears glow
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I love your fur rendering, I think he's looking great.
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@Gary-Wilkinson could we see what he'd look like with his mouth under his nose, not smiling but nervous?
Weird request
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@Gary-Wilkinson Really cool character. I love the ear, pointy, loud, full of energy.
I love the twist of having a tie in the contrast of portraying a rebellious character. I wonder if the rebellious feel would be better described if he is wearing the tie in slightly wrong way. -
@Gary-Wilkinson So cute! Best ears
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Super cute design!! I really love the way you painted him. The texture and the brush work adds a lot to his personality.
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I'm thinking to move the character more towards a regular fox than a fennec as I think the change in ear color will give it a bit more color variety. Also I made the tie a bit longer and the head slightly bigger, but im on the fence about the tie.
What do you think?
Black or without?
Long or short tie?
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Love the glowing ears! I like the colour change on the ears and the bigger head but I think I prefer the shorter tie...
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@Gary-Wilkinson I think longer tie works a little bit better as it emphasises the character's small size. You've done a really nice job of pushing the cute proportions, I really love everything about this character design !
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I like the darker colours but prefer the shorter tie. It’s framed nicely in his belly. It all gets a bit busy where it ends when it is longer.
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Speaking for all of us who had to wear a tie for school—like, a real tie, not a clip on one, ALL the cool (rebellious) kids wore their tie as short as they could get away with. Somewhere, wrapped around their bodies, like a fabric snake, the rest of the tie was hidden.
I was not a cool or rebellious kid. I was a rule follower. My tie was regulation length.
I LOVE this character.
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Darker colour and shorter tie gets my vote. Maybe even shorter for the tie? I agree with @janette about the rebelliousness
Looking really good!
