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    Basic Perspective Drawing

    SVS Class Work
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    • ambria
      ambria last edited by

      I wanted to post my final project from this class to maybe get some feedback on it. What does anyone think? Any comments are helpful! 🙂
      basic perspective final project.jpg

      Ambria (Bri) :D

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      • carlianne
        carlianne last edited by

        Great job making sure the vanishing points are out of frame! that really helps keep the perspective from getting too DrAmaTiC 😃

        The thing that stands out to me is the door, doors are weird when cracked open and I'm not totally sure how to plot it in perspective, but I think because the door is now closer to you than the frame that it will be larger and overlap the frame more like this:

        eab6aefb-9274-49c6-98e5-05189611c8d3-image.png

        maybe use the line from the corner of the frame where the door was when closed to figure out how tall it should be?
        (not sure this is 100% correct):

        a877de38-d475-49f1-be9b-686f2158bc57-image.png

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        • ambria
          ambria @carlianne last edited by

          @carlianne ok thanks a lot! i knew the door looked wrong, but i wasn't sure how to fix it. that was helpful!

          Ambria (Bri) :D

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          • Duh
            Duh @carlianne last edited by

            @carlianne This is great feed back and a wonderful tip on how to get the lines just right. I struggled with the same thing in my drawing but couldn't figure out how to correct it. Thanks for the clear explanation.

            @ambria Awesome start on tackling perspective. Hope you kept at it over the last couples months (as I am now just getting into the forums).

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