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    Effective Vehicle Design - Assignment 1A

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    • Meekipink
      Meekipink last edited by Meekipink

      Hi, all! I'm slowly getting through the first assignment for Shane Hunt's class. I've never drawn a vehicle in my life, but after watching the class on perfecting your children's portfolio, I realised I needed to get a start on filling in my knowledge gap asap 😬

      Four cars later and I'm super-duper happy!!

      Part A of Assignment #1 is about pushing a car design into four different but recognisable caricatures. What do you all think? Did I push it enough? Can you tell the personality of each car? I'd love to hear your thoughts and feedback.

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      • Tristan Lapetz
        Tristan Lapetz last edited by

        Super late response but..... This is fantastic! I can totally see some unifying forms and patterns in all of them. I think one thing that sort of estranges the bottom left one is the squareness of the windows/spare tire. This being said, I'd say you either could've pushed the others a little more or pushed this one slightly less in the unifying aspects like roundness, etc. All in all I really do love these designs, they're really fun and have a ton of character.

        Happy creating,
        Tristan

        IG: https://www.instagram.com/t_lapetz/

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        • Meekipink
          Meekipink @Tristan Lapetz last edited by

          @Tristan-Lapetz Thank you so much for the feedback, Tristan, I really appreciate your insights! (and, woah, sorry for not seeing this sooner). I do feel like the 3rd, square-ish one does feel like he's from his own universe. I purposely made him as square as I could, but since the others didn't get their own shape language, I guess he does stand out.

          I wouldn't mind doing this exercise again, it was unexpectedly fun drawing vehicles ^.^

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          • HeatherB
            HeatherB last edited by

            You’ve made vehicles look fun to draw which is a huge huge thing, coming from someone that never was interested in them beyond pickle car. So good!

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            • Meekipink
              Meekipink @HeatherB last edited by

              @HeatherB Oh, excellent! It made such a difference watching Shane draw and seeing that it isn't some mythical, magical process (start with a reference, make a really basic rough, and go from there).

              I really enjoyed the concept design section where you throw together a bunch of shapes to come up with a cool silhouette. That was eye-opening for me and could easily be used for character and set design as well.

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