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    AUGUST CONTEST: It's the first day of school for Albert!

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    • Larue
      Larue @aurelia last edited by

      @aurelia Super cute! Lovely use of white and color to direct your story!

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      • notfitkid
        notfitkid last edited by notfitkid

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        Hello everyone! I am not sure if it is too late to submit artwork at this point but here is my take on the prompt. I have taken the feedback from previous challenges to heart and have tried to imbue the illustration with a stronger narrative and more palpable degree of emotion. I definitely wanted to explore other camera angles and compositions but was only able to come up with one due time constraints. As always I wish everyone the best and welcome (and appreciate!) any feedback!

        Albert Lee
        Serial Doodler and Illustrator
        www.AlbertLeeIllustration.com
        https://www.instagram.com/albertleeillustration/

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        • DaveLeekArt
          DaveLeekArt @keithryanstudio last edited by

          @keithryanstudio thank you! I have a thing for monkeys/gorillas so I always tend to gravitate towards drawing them when I have a chance haha

          Instagram: @daveleekart

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          • DaveLeekArt
            DaveLeekArt @notfitkid last edited by

            @notfitkid this is great. I love the texture you achieved and the way you drew the faces on all of the characters. Really good work!

            Instagram: @daveleekart

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            • notfitkid
              notfitkid @DaveLeekArt last edited by

              @DaveLeekArt Thank you Dave. I loved the way you represented Albert's anxiety in such a tangible way. Hopefully your son's first day was much more enjoyable and relaxing!

              Albert Lee
              Serial Doodler and Illustrator
              www.AlbertLeeIllustration.com
              https://www.instagram.com/albertleeillustration/

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              • Melissa_Bailey
                Melissa_Bailey @marek.halko last edited by

                @marek-halko awesome! (Your illustrations are always amazing!) Love the zoomed-in perspective. Great storytelling.

                illustrator - author - smiley person
                mbaileyart.com
                instagram.com/mbaileyart/

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                • Melissa_Bailey
                  Melissa_Bailey @aurelia last edited by

                  @aurelia what a cute and adorable illustration! Love your cute and simple style.

                  illustrator - author - smiley person
                  mbaileyart.com
                  instagram.com/mbaileyart/

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                  • Melissa_Bailey
                    Melissa_Bailey @DaveLeekArt last edited by

                    @DaveLeekArt this took me back to the first day in class, the butterflies when you had to introduce yourself. Well done!

                    illustrator - author - smiley person
                    mbaileyart.com
                    instagram.com/mbaileyart/

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                    • Melissa_Bailey
                      Melissa_Bailey @keithryanstudio last edited by

                      @keithryanstudio thanks a bunch!

                      illustrator - author - smiley person
                      mbaileyart.com
                      instagram.com/mbaileyart/

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                      • Melissa_Bailey
                        Melissa_Bailey @Kim Rosenlof last edited by

                        @Kim-Rosenlof thanks! I love yours too — the chaos your Albert causes is SO funny!

                        illustrator - author - smiley person
                        mbaileyart.com
                        instagram.com/mbaileyart/

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                        • Melissa_Bailey
                          Melissa_Bailey @notfitkid last edited by

                          @notfitkid LOVE this! Hope you did submit in time. Thanks for sharing. Looking forward to seeing more of your work!

                          illustrator - author - smiley person
                          mbaileyart.com
                          instagram.com/mbaileyart/

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                          • notfitkid
                            notfitkid @Melissa_Bailey last edited by

                            @Melissa-Bailey-0 Thanks Melissa! Btw, your submission was so spot on! Loved the way you depicted the tension caused by Albert and yet evoke sympathy for him due to the fact that he is a wild creature. You have my vote already

                            Albert Lee
                            Serial Doodler and Illustrator
                            www.AlbertLeeIllustration.com
                            https://www.instagram.com/albertleeillustration/

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                            • Melissa_Bailey
                              Melissa_Bailey @notfitkid last edited by

                              @notfitkid thanks so much! Yeah, I just couldn’t see how ALL of the wild animal instincts could be trained out of Albert and then I wondered how he would react to a structured school day. He can only behave himself for so long before he falls back into his wombat wildness! 😂

                              illustrator - author - smiley person
                              mbaileyart.com
                              instagram.com/mbaileyart/

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                              • aurelia
                                aurelia @Larue last edited by

                                @Larue Thank you ! Your little anteater is very adorable, and I love the gesture he's giving a gift to the teacher on his first day of school, so sweet.

                                visit my website: https://turnip.co/

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                                • aurelia
                                  aurelia @Melissa_Bailey last edited by

                                  @Melissa-Bailey-0 Thank you! I love that you showing Albert's mischievous character in this piece.. his behavior of eating people's work is so Albert. And in fact you just use some tables and kids to show it's a classroom is brilliant... maybe i shouldn't put a wall in my piece after all.. ha ha

                                  visit my website: https://turnip.co/

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                                  • aurelia
                                    aurelia @keithryanstudio last edited by

                                    @keithryanstudio You have a great sense of humor... I can't stop laughing at him...So well done!

                                    visit my website: https://turnip.co/

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                                    • Larue
                                      Larue @Kim Rosenlof last edited by

                                      @Kim-Rosenlof So cute and playful...it's just a tiny little mouse.....

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                                      • DaveLeekArt
                                        DaveLeekArt @Melissa_Bailey last edited by

                                        @Melissa-Bailey-0 The WORST right?! Haha. Thanks!

                                        Instagram: @daveleekart

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                                        • Larue
                                          Larue @Jeremy Ross last edited by

                                          @Jeremy-Ross Loving all the lovely textures, loose line work and rich colors! Poor lil guy

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                                          • Melissa_Bailey
                                            Melissa_Bailey @aurelia last edited by

                                            @aurelia thanks so much! Having a mischievous character just "writes" scenarios to illustrate, doesn't it? And thanks for appreciating my less-is-more approach -- sometimes you need to illustrate a full classroom to tell the story, like your illustration. Since your Albert is walking into class for the first time, it would be hard to really convey the story and his feelings if you didn't show the entire room. In mine, I tried to get away with showing as little as possible and it still communicating school. 😊

                                            illustrator - author - smiley person
                                            mbaileyart.com
                                            instagram.com/mbaileyart/

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