"star" WIP
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@kathrynadebayo said in "star" WIP:
What's the story behind the volcano?
Time methinks to redraw things! The volcano is meant to be an impact crater from the star
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@melissa-bailey-0 said in "star" WIP:
the concept isn't clear.
Better to know now than to discover it later after submission
Time to take another pass at the crater!
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@braden-hallett ahhh, I see now. If there were some smoking stars visible and sticking out in the crater that would show what was going on. On another note... I would love to be able to draw human characters and expressions like you do!
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@lizardillo said in "star" WIP:
If there were some smoking stars visible and sticking out in the crater
I like that idea! I'll see what I can do
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Does register as a bit more a crater instead of a volcano now?
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@braden-hallett This reads way more clearly! I love the perfect star indentation in the crater. It made me laugh.
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@azupcsan Awesome! That's great to know
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Bigger star is better star! I think I may give the kid some oven mitts
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@braden-hallett Looks awesome!
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@braden-hallett YES! Concept is WAY more clear and I love the dripping star!
Is it still hot? Could it still be smoking or glowing? Love the idea of the oven mitts. Shows the boy's determination and ingenuity.
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@Braden-Hallett First of all kudos to the great silhouette of the main character with the reflected light on the rock face. What an ingenious way to solve this problem.
I wonder if the perspective of the crater is wonky. With it being raised so much it still reads as a caldera rather than an impact crater. What if you let the background ground extend more past the crater? or flattened the crater a little? I mean it still reads well and I am being a nitpicky ex-science person here...
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@braden-hallett It hasn't been mentioned and I think it would help that perhaps the boy would be singed a bit after all he did grab hold and lift the star into his wagon, and if it has left little glowing parts behind it would have left something on him. I liked more smoke personally.
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@braden-hallett love this!the idea is phenomenal! I d seriously consider giving the boy an animal friend, to share his joy of finding this huge treasure.Shared joy is double the joy!!
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@chrisaakins said in "star" WIP:
or flattened the crater a little?
I think that's probably my best bet! I'll do that
@heather-boyd said in "star" WIP:
It hasn't been mentioned and I think it would help that perhaps the boy would be singed a bit after all he did grab hold and lift the star into his wagon,
I'm thinking of adding some oven mitts! He definitely would be a tad singed
I'll be adding the smoke back in once I've figured a few other things out@georgios-christopoulos said in "star" WIP:
I d seriously consider giving the boy an animal friend
Perhaps some terrified wildlife still shocked by the blast from the impact?
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Work progresses!
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If not done it's close to done! I'm gonna put it away for a few days and come back to it
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Okay, with some rim light NOW it's done
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Amazing!
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@braden-hallett I love seeing how your concept evolved!
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It's been really fun to watch this progress and evolve. The finished piece is significantly better which goes to show that community is kind of awesome.
