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    Critiques welcome - A Character Ref for a Future Drawing

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      MidnightNoble last edited by

      This is Ray, a young teen who loves music, he takes inspiration from rock and some bands of similar genre. I was hoping I got the kind of feeling of young and lively as many of the characters I usually draw are adults. I do need to work on consistency in my art, any tips for that? IMG_0210.PNG

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        lpetiti @MidnightNoble last edited by

        @midnightnoble I like the idea!

        Continue to work on anatomy most of all; the limbs are a bit too long, especially if you're going for a younger look (in my opinion). There's a very odd tangent happening with the plaid shirt near the fork of the legs, it almost looks as though they are severed from the body, so be mindful of that.

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