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    • Lee White
      Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by Lee White

      Nice! Big improvement!!

      Great looking lion. the one thing I would look at is how a claw on cats work. just reaching out the foot straight ahead like you have it lack a dynamic gesture. Maybe try some different poses for that whole arm and see what looks best. I prefer the one with the kids. (hilarious!)

      Really cool!

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      • Chip Valecek
        Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @HaHernandez last edited by

        @HaHernandez i would keep the kids cheering on in there. Great job.


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        • bharris
          bharris last edited by

          Great job!

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          • HaHernandez
            HaHernandez last edited by

            @bharris Thank you, @Chip-Valecek, @Lee-White thanks for the input, I like the kids but wanted to make sure it wasn't too busy and I'm definitely going to use more reference as I refine it further . I'll continue to post the process as it goes on. I really wanted to thank everyone on here, I wasn't expecting so much community support and I'm glad @Will-Terry mentions svslearn so much on his youtube videos because I would've never known about this. There's a big difference in showing work to friends and family who all say its good but provide nothing else to getting honest feedback from people who seem genuinely invested in seeing people improve.

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            • Carrie
              Carrie last edited by

              I love the kids cheering. I am super impressed with how you've transformed this piece. You've inspired me to reconsider some of my decisions. Very nice job!

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              • Dulcie
                Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

                It looks amazing! Fantastic improvement, so much more dynamic and I also prefer the one with the kids cheering 🙂

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                  • lmrush
                    lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

                    Wow this is fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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                    • NoWayMe
                      NoWayMe last edited by

                      Great piece! Also love the kids!

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                      • Naroth Kean
                        Naroth Kean last edited by

                        oh wow the second sketch is really nice!

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                        • HaHernandez
                          HaHernandez last edited by

                          Wow! I just watched the Youtube critique this morning and saw that I was in the honorable mentions which was exciting enough considering the amazing talent that participated. The judges had some great feedback and tips which will definitely help with future submissions. The paint and draw overs were very educational and I was surprised how much information you could pick up on even if its not your piece being reworked. The big surprise though was when the winning image was displayed and it was mine. I truly was not expecting it and had to watch the end three times to make sure I wasnt misunderstanding it. Thank you to Will Terry, Jake Parker and of course Lee White for advising me to look at lion paw reference. It was an honor to participate and I look forward to the next one.heribertoahernandez.jpg

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                          • NoWayMe
                            NoWayMe @HaHernandez last edited by

                            @HaHernandez Congratulation! Amazing piece 🙂

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                            • HaHernandez
                              HaHernandez last edited by

                              @NoWayMe Thank you, I still cant believe it.

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                              • Camomilla
                                Camomilla last edited by

                                Awesome 😀 Congratulations 😀

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                                • Carrie
                                  Carrie last edited by

                                  Congratulations! You did an excellent job.

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                                  • HaHernandez
                                    HaHernandez last edited by

                                    @Camomilla @Carrie Thank you I appreciate it.

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                                    • karien
                                      karien last edited by

                                      Congrats buddy! It is an amazing piece!

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                                      • C
                                        Candiom last edited by

                                        I didn't watch the critiques yet, must do that today. Looks fantastic! What a leap from the first sketch! Super dynamic! Congrats!

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