Feedback needed - irish dance logo project

jenn

@oana I agree with @DoodleMick very pro! I really like the twisty ribbon effect, it adds drama and flair

Larue

Hi there, Late comment coming in. I've been watching the progress and I think it's coming together well. My one issue is that I think you're losing the readability of the "s" in shay. If I hadn't known it was an "s " I could have read it as an r,n, or s.

Oana

@larue Good point and you are right, I'll have to go over that once more! Ugh letters are so difficult!

Oana

@jenn Thank you! I tried to incorporate the twisty effect as a celtic element, it's much used in dance dress designs

tonydupreart

Sorry for the late comment - the latest version looks amazing. My comment - and only because reading it as a cat was discussed so much - is on the legs of the cat. They are human-like at the moment, and it might be worth trying to do an indication of feline leg anatomy, even if very subtle. If you have completely straight legs, it's fine due to simplification, but once you add a bend (especially the knee, like you have) or anatomical curve/muscle, then you're kind of committing to a species at that point. May be worth sketching out quick. (If I didn't catch that it's supposed to be this way, I'm sorry)

crispalomino

@oana I think it looks great, especially with the two colors.

Oana

Looks like the project is ready, here is how the final version turned out:

I also isolated the S with the cat, might be used on its own:

At present all looks good and we're happy, we still have to see the logo "in action".

All comments and suggestions received here were very helpful to me, thanks!!!!

Oana

@tonydupreart I get what you were saying. I smoothed out the leg shapes and though I am not sure it indicates "more feline" it does look better more stilised!

Jeremy Ross

Well done @oana!

Frogpunzel

@oana This was fun to see this come together. Thank you for sharing, and the final looks great!

Tannie Smith

@Oana Great job! I am so sad that I am just now seeing this. I love all the help you got and I think they definitely got you in the right place. What a fun project!