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    • chrisaakins
      chrisaakins last edited by chrisaakins

      I haven’t really been able to keep up this month and so I have this half done entry for March. What do you guys think? If I finished this up does it have a clear story and a good composition? Or should I trash it and move on with my life?

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      I was thinking “Chancy the Rabbit has an unlucky turn of events that may be mitigated by landing in a soft field of clover. His lucky duck sidekick never filed him yet!”

      I threw in some items associated with luck…

      What can be done to fix this?

      (After I submitted it I realized if I could have a black cat in there that caused his swerving off the road, that would be genius but I think that might make the picture too busy and crowded. It already feels crowded to me)

      Chris Akins
      www.chrisakinsart.com
      www.instagram.com/chrisakinsart/

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      • AngelinaKizz
        AngelinaKizz @chrisaakins last edited by

        @chrisaakins go for it. You don’t have anything to lose, by finishing it. I like it, I think the story is better than at the start where his luck had run out and it felt like he was plunging to his demise.

        www.evarartistry.com
        www.Instagram.com/evarartistry/

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