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    My April treehouse(s) wip(s) lol

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    • Asyas_illos
      Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

      Very rough sketch feedback welcome!

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      • Asyas_illos
        Asyas_illos last edited by

        This was my first but wasn't sure it was following directions “no background” what do you guys think?
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        • Griffin McPherson
          Griffin McPherson @Asyas_illos last edited by

          @Asyas_illos I think you were right to nix this one for it not sticking to the prompt. They said they want it like a spot illustration so it probably should run all the way up to the edges and the only thing we should see in the background is a blank page

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          • Griffin McPherson
            Griffin McPherson @Asyas_illos last edited by

            @Asyas_illos in general I like this piece but unfortunately it isn’t really a tree house. I think for it go be a tree house it needs to be a house that is built into a tree and that doesn’t feel like what we are seeing here.

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            • Asyas_illos
              Asyas_illos @Griffin McPherson last edited by

              @Griffin thanks for the honest feedback i will have to do some rethinking !

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              • AngelinaKizz
                AngelinaKizz last edited by

                I think the first one is super cute but it does need the tree aspect. I also think for it to be the coolest tree house, that there’d need to be no way for the kids to get up there, while the mom enjoys her coffee. Pull up the ladder, with no slide?

                The second one, I love the idea of the draping leaves concealing the treehouse, but I think you’d need to zoom further out, to hit the spot illustration requirement.

                I think you could easily convert both, to better suit the prompt.

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                • Asyas_illos
                  Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                  @AngelinaKizz yes already on it! I’m not giving up on these ideas so easily, for the sketch I’m going to have it suspended between four small trees instead. And yah for the colored one, when I’ve finished it up I will zoom it out and round off the the top. The size restrictions stink tho in my opinion, I’ll probably lose a bit of detail when I do so.

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                  • Asyas_illos
                    Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                    @AngelinaKizz I am surprised you spotted that poorly sketched out stick mom up there! Lol😆

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                    • Asyas_illos
                      Asyas_illos last edited by

                      Fixed this one but I didn’t want the branches of the tree obstructing the view of the tree house so decided to chop that one… 🤷🏻‍♀️C901F939-19E7-450B-997F-0F92406A10FE.jpeg

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                      • AngelinaKizz
                        AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

                        @Asyas_illos
                        A mom can pick out a mom enjoying her quiet alone time ANYWHERE bahahahaha.

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                        • Asyas_illos
                          Asyas_illos last edited by

                          This is how I originally wanted this piece to go but thought it was too fantastical what do you all think?F45A9E43-30BE-4E5D-8B6C-118E3A62E7A5.jpeg

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                            carlianne @Asyas_illos last edited by

                            @Asyas_illos What's wrong with it being fantastical?

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                            • chrisaakins
                              chrisaakins @Asyas_illos last edited by

                              @Asyas_illos I actually like this idea the best. I think a living space suspended in a giant plant is the bare minimum of a treehouse definition.

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                              • Asyas_illos
                                Asyas_illos last edited by

                                Ok l think this one is good now, meeting the requirements that is
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                                • Asyas_illos
                                  Asyas_illos @chrisaakins last edited by

                                  @chrisaakins @carlianne I know! what was I thinking! Thanks for the reassurance, I guess I was perplexed because the weren’t technically trees…

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                                  • Kim Rosenlof
                                    Kim Rosenlof @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                    @Asyas_illos I like all of your treehouses. Very cute!

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                                    • AngelinaKizz
                                      AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                      @Asyas_illos oh I love it! Very inviting.

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                                      • Asyas_illos
                                        Asyas_illos @Kim Rosenlof last edited by

                                        @Kim-Rosenlof thank you!

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                                        • Asyas_illos
                                          Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                                          @AngelinaKizz thanks!

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                                          • Asyas_illos
                                            Asyas_illos last edited by

                                            Gonna go for witchy vibes with this one😊
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