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    My April treehouse(s) wip(s) lol

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      Asyas_illos @Kim Rosenlof last edited by

      @Kim-Rosenlof thank you!

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        Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by

        @AngelinaKizz thanks!

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          Asyas_illos last edited by

          Gonna go for witchy vibes with this one😊
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            Asyas_illos last edited by

            Personally I like how the tallest sunflower goes off the page I wanted to show their gigantism but do you think I should bring it down to fit?
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            • Larue
              Larue @Asyas_illos last edited by

              @Asyas_illos You're so clever with your reveal, I Love the willow but couldn't see how to "show" the house with all the overhanging branches. Nice problem solving and very cute!

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                Asyas_illos @Larue last edited by

                @Larue thank you, not the overall shape I wanted to go for but I’m pleased with the outcome. I was lazy and didn’t want to rework it too much lol

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                  Asyas_illos last edited by

                  progress update: not sure about how to secure the structure to the stalks… at first I had it tied but again not practical? I don’t know, I’ll just play around with it and see how it goes!
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                  • KatrinaF
                    KatrinaF @Asyas_illos last edited by

                    @Asyas_illos This is such a cute Idea. Hummm attaching stalks and the house is tough. Can't wait to see what you come up with. 🙂

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                      Asyas_illos @KatrinaF last edited by Asyas_illos

                      @KatrinaF thanks! I think I’ve got it😊
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                        Asyas_illos last edited by

                        That’s a wrap on this one!
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                          Asyas_illos last edited by

                          So going for concept here lol what are your thoughts on this?
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                            Asyas_illos last edited by

                            Worked on it a little more I could hear will saying well who's flying it? How can they see?
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                              Asyas_illos last edited by

                              Still thinking about color choices
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                                Jeremiahbrown @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                @Asyas_illos Fun idea, keep going with it! I'd say take it up a few notches...maybe have the other tree parts blowing in the propeller wind, the boat rocking in the waves created, etc.

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                                • AlliFaith
                                  AlliFaith @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                  @Asyas_illos I think its super cute. Perhaps there is a surprised owl inside or something? I agree you could take it up a notch but I really like it.

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                                    Asyas_illos @Jeremiahbrown last edited by

                                    @Jeremiahbrown thanks for the feedback I’ve been trying to think of other details I can add but drawing blanks. Also I really loved your entry I think you would have easily been top four if not a winner had it been a normal critique arena.

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                                      Griffin McPherson @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                      @Asyas_illos LOVE this idea. Can’t wait to see its progress

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                                        Asyas_illos @Griffin McPherson last edited by

                                        @Griffin thank you!

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                                          Asyas_illos @AlliFaith last edited by

                                          @AlliFaith thank you 😊 I’m working on ways I can spice it up!

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                                          • Johanna Kim
                                            Johanna Kim SVS OG @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                            @Asyas_illos Your creativity is off the charts. I'm always amazed by your ideas. This one is so striking and unique. Choosing colors is challenging; I'm interested to see what you come up with. But one thought--I'm loving the energy of the previous iteration of this piece, without the color. Perhaps it's the scratchiness of the line? Don't lose that as you move forward.

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