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    My April treehouse(s) wip(s) lol

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    • Asyas_illos
      Asyas_illos last edited by

      Gonna go for witchy vibes with this one😊
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      • Asyas_illos
        Asyas_illos last edited by

        Personally I like how the tallest sunflower goes off the page I wanted to show their gigantism but do you think I should bring it down to fit?
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        • Larue
          Larue @Asyas_illos last edited by

          @Asyas_illos You're so clever with your reveal, I Love the willow but couldn't see how to "show" the house with all the overhanging branches. Nice problem solving and very cute!

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          • Asyas_illos
            Asyas_illos @Larue last edited by

            @Larue thank you, not the overall shape I wanted to go for but I’m pleased with the outcome. I was lazy and didn’t want to rework it too much lol

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            • Asyas_illos
              Asyas_illos last edited by

              progress update: not sure about how to secure the structure to the stalks… at first I had it tied but again not practical? I don’t know, I’ll just play around with it and see how it goes!
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              • KatrinaF
                KatrinaF @Asyas_illos last edited by

                @Asyas_illos This is such a cute Idea. Hummm attaching stalks and the house is tough. Can't wait to see what you come up with. 🙂

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                • Asyas_illos
                  Asyas_illos @KatrinaF last edited by Asyas_illos

                  @KatrinaF thanks! I think I’ve got it😊
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                  • Asyas_illos
                    Asyas_illos last edited by

                    That’s a wrap on this one!
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                    • Asyas_illos
                      Asyas_illos last edited by

                      So going for concept here lol what are your thoughts on this?
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                      • Asyas_illos
                        Asyas_illos last edited by

                        Worked on it a little more I could hear will saying well who's flying it? How can they see?
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                        • Asyas_illos
                          Asyas_illos last edited by

                          Still thinking about color choices
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                          • Jeremiahbrown
                            Jeremiahbrown @Asyas_illos last edited by

                            @Asyas_illos Fun idea, keep going with it! I'd say take it up a few notches...maybe have the other tree parts blowing in the propeller wind, the boat rocking in the waves created, etc.

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                            • AlliFaith
                              AlliFaith @Asyas_illos last edited by

                              @Asyas_illos I think its super cute. Perhaps there is a surprised owl inside or something? I agree you could take it up a notch but I really like it.

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                              • Asyas_illos
                                Asyas_illos @Jeremiahbrown last edited by

                                @Jeremiahbrown thanks for the feedback I’ve been trying to think of other details I can add but drawing blanks. Also I really loved your entry I think you would have easily been top four if not a winner had it been a normal critique arena.

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                                • Griffin McPherson
                                  Griffin McPherson @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                  @Asyas_illos LOVE this idea. Can’t wait to see its progress

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                                  • Asyas_illos
                                    Asyas_illos @Griffin McPherson last edited by

                                    @Griffin thank you!

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                                    • Asyas_illos
                                      Asyas_illos @AlliFaith last edited by

                                      @AlliFaith thank you 😊 I’m working on ways I can spice it up!

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                                      • Johanna Kim
                                        Johanna Kim SVS OG @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                        @Asyas_illos Your creativity is off the charts. I'm always amazed by your ideas. This one is so striking and unique. Choosing colors is challenging; I'm interested to see what you come up with. But one thought--I'm loving the energy of the previous iteration of this piece, without the color. Perhaps it's the scratchiness of the line? Don't lose that as you move forward.

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                                        • Asyas_illos
                                          Asyas_illos @Johanna Kim last edited by

                                          @Johanna-Kim thank you and congrats on your win! I feel like yesterday’s critique arena was designed just for me lol I always rush into ideas! And I notice after each illustration the next one is better in some way. I have adhd so when I get an idea I have to roll with immediately because I’m afraid I’ll lose interest and end up with nothing! I’ve really come to love the scratchy edges as my style has progressed almost linographic in way, so I’ll try and keep it up with my finished piece!

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                                          • Asyas_illos
                                            Asyas_illos last edited by

                                            Think I’m gonna keep the color palette natural but I may still play around with filters also I may decide to omit the water, dock and boat not sure yet…
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