My April treehouse(s) wip(s) lol
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Personally I like how the tallest sunflower goes off the page I wanted to show their gigantism but do you think I should bring it down to fit?
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@Asyas_illos You're so clever with your reveal, I Love the willow but couldn't see how to "show" the house with all the overhanging branches. Nice problem solving and very cute!
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@Larue thank you, not the overall shape I wanted to go for but I’m pleased with the outcome. I was lazy and didn’t want to rework it too much lol
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progress update: not sure about how to secure the structure to the stalks… at first I had it tied but again not practical? I don’t know, I’ll just play around with it and see how it goes!
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@Asyas_illos This is such a cute Idea. Hummm attaching stalks and the house is tough. Can't wait to see what you come up with.
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@KatrinaF thanks! I think I’ve got it
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That’s a wrap on this one!
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So going for concept here lol what are your thoughts on this?
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Worked on it a little more I could hear will saying well who's flying it? How can they see?
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Still thinking about color choices
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@Asyas_illos Fun idea, keep going with it! I'd say take it up a few notches...maybe have the other tree parts blowing in the propeller wind, the boat rocking in the waves created, etc.
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@Asyas_illos I think its super cute. Perhaps there is a surprised owl inside or something? I agree you could take it up a notch but I really like it.
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@Jeremiahbrown thanks for the feedback I’ve been trying to think of other details I can add but drawing blanks. Also I really loved your entry I think you would have easily been top four if not a winner had it been a normal critique arena.
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@Asyas_illos LOVE this idea. Can’t wait to see its progress
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@Griffin thank you!
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@AlliFaith thank you
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@Asyas_illos Your creativity is off the charts. I'm always amazed by your ideas. This one is so striking and unique. Choosing colors is challenging; I'm interested to see what you come up with. But one thought--I'm loving the energy of the previous iteration of this piece, without the color. Perhaps it's the scratchiness of the line? Don't lose that as you move forward.
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@Johanna-Kim thank you and congrats on your win! I feel like yesterday’s critique arena was designed just for me lol I always rush into ideas! And I notice after each illustration the next one is better in some way. I have adhd so when I get an idea I have to roll with immediately because I’m afraid I’ll lose interest and end up with nothing! I’ve really come to love the scratchy edges as my style has progressed almost linographic in way, so I’ll try and keep it up with my finished piece!
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Think I’m gonna keep the color palette natural but I may still play around with filters also I may decide to omit the water, dock and boat not sure yet…
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I guess I just need to add some details like the gnomes in the cockpit
