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    My April treehouse(s) wip(s) lol

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    • Asyas_illos
      Asyas_illos last edited by

      progress update: not sure about how to secure the structure to the stalks… at first I had it tied but again not practical? I don’t know, I’ll just play around with it and see how it goes!
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      • KatrinaF
        KatrinaF @Asyas_illos last edited by

        @Asyas_illos This is such a cute Idea. Hummm attaching stalks and the house is tough. Can't wait to see what you come up with. 🙂

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        • Asyas_illos
          Asyas_illos @KatrinaF last edited by Asyas_illos

          @KatrinaF thanks! I think I’ve got it😊
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          • Asyas_illos
            Asyas_illos last edited by

            That’s a wrap on this one!
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            • Asyas_illos
              Asyas_illos last edited by

              So going for concept here lol what are your thoughts on this?
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              • Asyas_illos
                Asyas_illos last edited by

                Worked on it a little more I could hear will saying well who's flying it? How can they see?
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                • Asyas_illos
                  Asyas_illos last edited by

                  Still thinking about color choices
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                  • Jeremiahbrown
                    Jeremiahbrown @Asyas_illos last edited by

                    @Asyas_illos Fun idea, keep going with it! I'd say take it up a few notches...maybe have the other tree parts blowing in the propeller wind, the boat rocking in the waves created, etc.

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                    • AlliFaith
                      AlliFaith @Asyas_illos last edited by

                      @Asyas_illos I think its super cute. Perhaps there is a surprised owl inside or something? I agree you could take it up a notch but I really like it.

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                      • Asyas_illos
                        Asyas_illos @Jeremiahbrown last edited by

                        @Jeremiahbrown thanks for the feedback I’ve been trying to think of other details I can add but drawing blanks. Also I really loved your entry I think you would have easily been top four if not a winner had it been a normal critique arena.

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                        • Griffin McPherson
                          Griffin McPherson @Asyas_illos last edited by

                          @Asyas_illos LOVE this idea. Can’t wait to see its progress

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                          • Asyas_illos
                            Asyas_illos @Griffin McPherson last edited by

                            @Griffin thank you!

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                            • Asyas_illos
                              Asyas_illos @AlliFaith last edited by

                              @AlliFaith thank you 😊 I’m working on ways I can spice it up!

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                              • Johanna Kim
                                Johanna Kim SVS OG @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                @Asyas_illos Your creativity is off the charts. I'm always amazed by your ideas. This one is so striking and unique. Choosing colors is challenging; I'm interested to see what you come up with. But one thought--I'm loving the energy of the previous iteration of this piece, without the color. Perhaps it's the scratchiness of the line? Don't lose that as you move forward.

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                                • Asyas_illos
                                  Asyas_illos @Johanna Kim last edited by

                                  @Johanna-Kim thank you and congrats on your win! I feel like yesterday’s critique arena was designed just for me lol I always rush into ideas! And I notice after each illustration the next one is better in some way. I have adhd so when I get an idea I have to roll with immediately because I’m afraid I’ll lose interest and end up with nothing! I’ve really come to love the scratchy edges as my style has progressed almost linographic in way, so I’ll try and keep it up with my finished piece!

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                                  • Asyas_illos
                                    Asyas_illos last edited by

                                    Think I’m gonna keep the color palette natural but I may still play around with filters also I may decide to omit the water, dock and boat not sure yet…
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                                    • Asyas_illos
                                      Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

                                      I guess I just need to add some details like the gnomes in the cockpit
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                                        Julia Rangel @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                        @Asyas_illos I really love this design

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                                        • Asyas_illos
                                          Asyas_illos last edited by

                                          I probably jumped to eagerly into this one again. I feel like the concept there just not sure I delivered it well enough. I’m really pleased with the outcome but if anybody has any suggestions or feedback I’m still open to it. I will probably submit in the next day or so
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                                          • Jeremiahbrown
                                            Jeremiahbrown @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                            @Asyas_illos Aww, thank you for letting me know! I love the added movement and the little details in your update. The gnomes are adorable. Maybe add more little details like a welcome rug, poster on the wall, doorway lamp, mailbox, gnome, outdoor shower, etc. to make it feel more lived in, gnomey, and add a little more variety in color? This is my favorite of your versions so far!

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