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    My April treehouse(s) wip(s) lol

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    • KatrinaF
      KatrinaF @Asyas_illos last edited by

      @Asyas_illos With such a unique concept I like the traditional green. but I also like the purple. šŸ™‚

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      • Asyas_illos
        Asyas_illos @lizardillo last edited by

        @lizardillo thanks for the feedback, I understand what you mean about the scale I wanted to make the gnomes a little bigger but then you couldn’t see the red hats in the cockpit they didn’t look like gnomes. Maybe since I added the gnome on the ground you’ll get the idea anyway or change the hats to pilot hats? I’ll play around with it more. Thanks

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        • Asyas_illos
          Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

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          Ok I’ve adjusted the size of the gnomes and the darkened the bird a little, obviously it’s not meant to be a full size tree, it’s kind of dwarfed I guess, which is throwing everybody off, not sure how I can adjust that at this stage though. I think I still need to desaturate the red of gnomes a bit…also can you tell that the gnome on the ground is eating a sandwich? Not super important tho.

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          • Johanna Kim
            Johanna Kim SVS OG @Asyas_illos last edited by Johanna Kim

            @Asyas_illos Yes, much better! Now I focus on the tree and the bird is an additional side gag. I can almost see it hanging on by just one clawed foot, maybe even angled slightly upside down. But it works, as is, as well. With the gnomes flying the top of the tree house, the one that's pointing is looking at his copilot, but the copilot isn't really looking back at him. I think a subtle turn of his head so they're connecting more would be a nice touch. Also the gnome at the bottom, he's kind've disconnected from the exciting action above. What if he was looking up at the action, or maybe he missed the flight so he's waving his arms like, wait for me! Lastly, the sign below is a little hard to read. Maybe you can make the letters the same color as the golden yellow? Just some minor suggestions, but it looks amazing already.

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            • Asyas_illos
              Asyas_illos @Johanna Kim last edited by

              @Johanna-Kim the gnome at the bottom is sort like the ā€œfat security guardā€ who’s oblivious to everything lol thanks for all helpful feedback!

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              • Asyas_illos
                Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

                I think I’m done with this project I know there’s not a lot to the actual ā€œtree houseā€but I’m hoping the concept is enough to drive it home. Thanks to everybody’s wonderful feedback!FFCA91C3-DCE2-4D14-9311-8DBB3167A404.jpeg

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                • Kim Rosenlof
                  Kim Rosenlof @Asyas_illos last edited by

                  @Asyas_illos I really like this. It is a very unique take on a tree house.

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                  • Asyas_illos
                    Asyas_illos @Kim Rosenlof last edited by

                    @Kim-Rosenlof thanks Kim ā˜ŗļø

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                    • Asyas_illos
                      Asyas_illos last edited by

                      Got another concept here any thoughts?
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                      • Cayleen
                        Cayleen @Asyas_illos last edited by

                        @Asyas_illos The acorn shape makes me think this is a cool tree house for squirrels!

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                        • Larue
                          Larue last edited by

                          Love them both!

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                          • Asyas_illos
                            Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

                            So, super simple once again, just laying down some color thinking about the story…
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                            • Kristen Lango
                              Kristen Lango @Asyas_illos last edited by

                              @Asyas_illos This is cool! It's an acorn on a pulley system? I love that

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                              • Asyas_illos
                                Asyas_illos @Kristen Lango last edited by

                                @Kristen-Lango yes! Thank you, just trying to think of more details I could add…

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                                • Asyas_illos
                                  Asyas_illos last edited by

                                  Here’s where I am at, going to add some lights but it needs more…E7A93C29-81B6-429B-9BA0-AE89C8621D3D.jpeg

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                                  • Kristen Lango
                                    Kristen Lango @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                    @Asyas_illos I see what you mean - I know they wanted it to be a spot illustration focused on the environment/building design, but maybe some cute squirrels who've got a story around this treehouse?

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                                    • Asyas_illos
                                      Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

                                      Added a diving board! And pond/lake. @Kristen-Lango maybe he should have a squirrel buddy? And a squirrel towel? LolšŸ¤·šŸ»ā€ā™€ļø
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                                      • Kristen Lango
                                        Kristen Lango @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                        @Asyas_illos haha nice! I love it, I would love to see him with a squirrel buddy šŸ˜„

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                                        • Asyas_illos
                                          Asyas_illos last edited by

                                          Ok got some squirrels, a rope for additional ascension, we have a hand crank, I think I’m going to put someone down on the towel and call it good šŸ‘šŸ¼
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                                          • Asyas_illos
                                            Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

                                            Nope forgot about the name space so took the towel out think I’m done, if you spot something in the next day let me know!
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