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    • Kim Rosenlof
      Kim Rosenlof @patricialamas last edited by

      @patricialamas This is lovely. I like the color palette and the characters are so nice. I especially love the style and the changes you made. To me the tray that has the cup on it looks like it could also be part of the window frame because they are similar colors. Maybe you could make it slightly darker or lighter than the window frame or adjust the color a little bit?

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      • Kristen Lango
        Kristen Lango @patricialamas last edited by

        @patricialamas Ah nice, then I think it's perfect!

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        • patricialamas
          patricialamas @Kim Rosenlof last edited by

          @Kim-Rosenlof Good suggestion! I made it brown and lowered it a bit. Thanks!

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