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    • Asyas_illos
      Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

      Haha these faces were too fun
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        KevinTreaccar @Asyas_illos last edited by

        @Asyas_illos Have you seen the Making of Frozen 2 doc on Disney+ yet? This reminds me of the girl animating the group/school/pod/dunno of reindeer running and singing.

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          Asyas_illos @KevinTreaccar last edited by Asyas_illos

          @KevinTreaccar no I’ll check it out though👍🏼

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            Asyas_illos @KevinTreaccar last edited by

            @KevinTreaccar but they remind me of Olaf with their teeth lol

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              KevinTreaccar @Asyas_illos last edited by

              @Asyas_illos The whole series is great, but her breaking down how she did that was hilarious and one of the biggest highlights.

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                Meekipink @Asyas_illos last edited by

                @Asyas_illos Ok, this one is BRILLIANT!!! I think you've struck gold, haha.

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                  Asyas_illos @Meekipink last edited by

                  @Meekipink haha thanks 😆

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                    Asyas_illos last edited by

                    Ok update what do you guys think? Does everybody look proportional, for the most part? Can you tell the predator is a fox? Composition? I’m still going to adjust a few things like light and shadow. But this pretty much done.
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                      ArtMelC @Asyas_illos last edited by

                      @Asyas_illos Brilliant concept! Honestly it is a bit difficult for me to tell that it is a fox trying to pass off as rabbit.

                      I didn't realize it was sticking its tongue out in a "yummy buffet ahead" kind of way because I spent a few seconds trying to guess what it is before realizing it was a tongue.
                      Maybe a couple of teeth would give a stronger hint?

                      Also is the number 4 deliberately mirror imaged? It's the first thing that struck me lol. Great job with the rabbits' expressions

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                        Asyas_illos @ArtMelC last edited by

                        @ArtMelC thanks for the feedback! I’ll see what I can do about making him more readable as a fox. My daughter said he looked like a bear… and yes I made the 4 backwards on purpose to show that he doesn’t really know what’s going on, he’s just trying to get a bite to eat, I contemplated making it a letter lol.

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                            Asyas_illos @Rebecca Jensen last edited by

                            @Rebecca-Jensen thanks for the feedback that would’ve been a great pov! Perhaps on another I’ve already submitted this one I know it’s not the best of my entries and that’s ok. Maybe I can rework it for the old portfolio, huh?

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