17 Jul 2022, 10:48

Have decided to start a thread for documenting my process and learnings from working on critque arena pieces. Hope it will keep me motivated to keep creating, critiquing my own work, and learning from past mistakes, and that maybe others will learn something from my process and mistakes as well.

As always, feedback and critique is welcome! Destroy me! ๐Ÿ˜น

So my first ever entry was for the prompt in May, "Storm". Thanks to the couple of folks who took the time to critique my piece, I now know better what to look out for.

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Story: character's emotions are clear and intense, but the story is ambiguous and unclear. People couldn't figure out why the kid was running towards the otters, or why the otters had the expressions they had. The lighting was dramatic but didn't really serve to enhance the storytelling. The spotlight is on the baby otter who's crying but it's unclear why he's crying, and really the emphasis should have been on the girl running towards Mr. Otter, her long-lost friend. I had a clear story in my head but it needed a lot of backstory or accompanying text to support it (reunion between Mr. Otter and Shan Shan (the kid), after Mr. Otter set up his new family)

Technical issues: I think rendering overall was fine although there are now a couple of things I can see that I'm not satisfied with. Shan Shan's legs are actually too long and her posture seems slightly stiff. Also the cropping is too close, and Ma ma otter's face is a little off. I'm ambivalent about the rain splatters around the characters. Some people thought it looked a little unnatural.