First Time Posting- Rabbit Race (missed the road…)

[Lara Saldana]

Hi! I have never used a forum like this before. I just realized I completely missed the word “road” in my brain . I figured I’ll post it anyway to get some critique and work on a new one for the actual contest. I am loving the courses so far. I appreciate any feedback.

[lucy_gow]

@Lara-Saldana A road with snow on it is still a road.
I like the cute little rabbits waiting at the end.

[Asyas_illos]

@Lara-Saldana yep this still fits the requirements submit and do another too! Love it make ps me want to snowboarding!

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

@Lara-Saldana looking greeat!

[kirsten-mcg]

I think it works! And its unique, because I doubt many other people think of putting rabbits in the snow this time of year.

[Johanna Kim]

@Lara-Saldana Adorable! Love it.

[Lara Saldana]

@lucy_gow haha if you think so?? I wouldn’t think it is really a road but I’ll take it!

[Lara Saldana]

@Asyas_illos yayy!! I did not expect that to meet the requirements! I have another story in my head that is more roadish but not sure I’ll have enough time to pull it off

[Lara Saldana]

@Nyrryl-Cadiz thank you!

[Lara Saldana]

@kirsten-mcg thank you!

[Lara Saldana]

@Johanna-Kim thank you!

[Asyas_illos]

@Lara-Saldana when in doubt enter it anyways! No harm in it

[Rebecca Jensen]

@Lara-Saldana I love your determined snowboarding rabbit!

One little nitpicky detail on that rabbit- what I think is a lift ticket on the jacket zipper (great detail!) confused me at first. The white makes it look like a 'hole', so I thought there was something funky happening with the waist and arm, and it didn't read as a ticket.

More generally, I think there just could be more story here. I see that the rabbit is about to win, but I don't have any sense as to why, or how, or whether it was expected or surprising, etc. I feel like the story could be just a bit more specific.

Overall great image though! The characters are appealing, nice swoop in the composition, color palette is pleasing. Looking forward to seeing your next one!

[Lara Saldana]

@Rebecca-Jensen thank you!