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    First Time Posting- Rabbit Race (missed the road…)

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    • lucy_gow
      lucy_gow @Lara Saldana last edited by

      @Lara-Saldana A road with snow on it is still a road. 🙂
      I like the cute little rabbits waiting at the end.

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      • Asyas_illos
        Asyas_illos @Lara Saldana last edited by

        @Lara-Saldana yep this still fits the requirements submit and do another too! Love it make ps me want to snowboarding!

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        • Nyrryl  Cadiz
          Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Lara Saldana last edited by

          @Lara-Saldana looking greeat!

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          • kirsten-mcg
            kirsten-mcg last edited by

            I think it works! And its unique, because I doubt many other people think of putting rabbits in the snow this time of year.

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            • Johanna Kim
              Johanna Kim SVS OG @Lara Saldana last edited by

              @Lara-Saldana Adorable! Love it.

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              • Lara Saldana
                Lara Saldana @lucy_gow last edited by

                @lucy_gow haha if you think so?? I wouldn’t think it is really a road but I’ll take it!

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                • Lara Saldana
                  Lara Saldana @Asyas_illos last edited by

                  @Asyas_illos yayy!! I did not expect that to meet the requirements! I have another story in my head that is more roadish but not sure I’ll have enough time to pull it off

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                  • Lara Saldana
                    Lara Saldana @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                    @Nyrryl-Cadiz thank you!

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                    • Lara Saldana
                      Lara Saldana @kirsten-mcg last edited by

                      @kirsten-mcg thank you!

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                      • Lara Saldana
                        Lara Saldana @Johanna Kim last edited by

                        @Johanna-Kim thank you!

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                        • Asyas_illos
                          Asyas_illos @Lara Saldana last edited by

                          @Lara-Saldana when in doubt enter it anyways! No harm in it👍🏼

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                          • Rebecca Jensen
                            Rebecca Jensen @Lara Saldana last edited by

                            @Lara-Saldana I love your determined snowboarding rabbit!

                            One little nitpicky detail on that rabbit- what I think is a lift ticket on the jacket zipper (great detail!) confused me at first. The white makes it look like a 'hole', so I thought there was something funky happening with the waist and arm, and it didn't read as a ticket.

                            More generally, I think there just could be more story here. I see that the rabbit is about to win, but I don't have any sense as to why, or how, or whether it was expected or surprising, etc. I feel like the story could be just a bit more specific.

                            Overall great image though! The characters are appealing, nice swoop in the composition, color palette is pleasing. Looking forward to seeing your next one!

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                            • Lara Saldana
                              Lara Saldana @Rebecca Jensen last edited by

                              @Rebecca-Jensen thank you!

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