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    • kirsten-mcg
      kirsten-mcg last edited by

      I think it works! And its unique, because I doubt many other people think of putting rabbits in the snow this time of year.

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      • Johanna Kim
        Johanna Kim SVS OG @Lara Saldana last edited by

        @Lara-Saldana Adorable! Love it.

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        • Lara Saldana
          Lara Saldana @lucy_gow last edited by

          @lucy_gow haha if you think so?? I wouldn’t think it is really a road but I’ll take it!

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          • Lara Saldana
            Lara Saldana @Asyas_illos last edited by

            @Asyas_illos yayy!! I did not expect that to meet the requirements! I have another story in my head that is more roadish but not sure I’ll have enough time to pull it off

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              Lara Saldana @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

              @Nyrryl-Cadiz thank you!

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                Lara Saldana @kirsten-mcg last edited by

                @kirsten-mcg thank you!

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                  Lara Saldana @Johanna Kim last edited by

                  @Johanna-Kim thank you!

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                  • Asyas_illos
                    Asyas_illos @Lara Saldana last edited by

                    @Lara-Saldana when in doubt enter it anyways! No harm in it👍🏼

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                    • Rebecca Jensen
                      Rebecca Jensen @Lara Saldana last edited by

                      @Lara-Saldana I love your determined snowboarding rabbit!

                      One little nitpicky detail on that rabbit- what I think is a lift ticket on the jacket zipper (great detail!) confused me at first. The white makes it look like a 'hole', so I thought there was something funky happening with the waist and arm, and it didn't read as a ticket.

                      More generally, I think there just could be more story here. I see that the rabbit is about to win, but I don't have any sense as to why, or how, or whether it was expected or surprising, etc. I feel like the story could be just a bit more specific.

                      Overall great image though! The characters are appealing, nice swoop in the composition, color palette is pleasing. Looking forward to seeing your next one!

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                      • Lara Saldana
                        Lara Saldana @Rebecca Jensen last edited by

                        @Rebecca-Jensen thank you!

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