Critiques for Portfolio Pieces
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Started on another piece, a two page spread of Peter Pan. I’m excited about this one so far.
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Update on Peter Pan pages -
I need a second opinion on my Peter Pan drawing. I will be adding facial features and outlining later, but right now I’m trying to make sure the head shape makes sense. I couldn’t get a good reference photo for this pose so what do you guys think makes more sense for his head shape especially the forehead/nose relationship for him to be a kid?
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I still don’t know what to do about the Peter Pan drawing. I can’t tell which head looks better. I need some help.
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@kayleenartlover I think once you add the features it will look ok it’s hard to tell right now
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@Asyas_illos I just can’t tell which one has better proportions with the forehead/nose/chin proportions
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@kayleenartlover oh I see it now I like the first one or the one on the left.
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@kayleenartlover I’d go with the left one. His head looks rounder and more childlike
