17 Sept 2022, 20:19
Cloud challenge
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I’m wondering if this spot illustration needs anything else, or if I should redraw it…
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@kayleenartlover Cute! And after yesterday's critique arena, we saw that pieces with dogs always win lol!
I think it's looking great. You could try adding some tree tops close up in the bottom right hand corner if you want to add another layer to help draw us in. -
@kayleenartlover I think tone will help it a lot. Upon first glance, I was going to say you might need to redraw it because it looks like a mountain. Tone can help bring focus to the cloud the mountain is hugging. Seeing the cloud makes the piece adorable.
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Very cute idea and representation
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@kayleenartlover Very cute. The cloud already stands out better here, but you might consider making the sky a med gray and the snow a soft gray before the cloud(s) remain as the only white part(s).
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@kayleenartlover Very cute! I love how it's turning out!