Mother goose's first flight through the clouds

[Frogpunzel]

Here is my picture... I need to get a better image of it and do some touch ups but this is what I have so far. Ink is so unforgiving, but that kind of makes it fun too.

Do I need more contrast? Any photoshop type edits? Thanks

[Jeremy Ross]

Great idea, @Frogpunzel. Yes, add dark gray or near black for contrast.

Looking good

[Frogpunzel]

@Jeremy-Ross Thank you, I will do that!

[KevinTreaccar]

@Frogpunzel Agree on adding contrast. Maybe lighten the punctured clouds a little, too, so the holes pop a little more? Though not as much as Mother Goose, of course.

[Frogpunzel]

Feeling a little better about the contrast here. Any thoughts? Thanks

[KevinTreaccar]

@Frogpunzel Yes, this reads easier and is definitely more dynamic.

[Frogpunzel]

@KevinTreaccar Awesome, thank you!