Cloud WIP, Feedback please!
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Hi everyone! Here's my idea for the Cloud contest... Do you guys think the story reads clearly? Is the composition good? Anything I should add/remove before I finish it up?
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What a great concept! The only feedback I have is the baby’s head could use a little reshaping, sorry it’s very, um, vegetable shaped? I would make it a bit larger and rounder, good luck!
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@Asyas_illos Thanks! Oh you're right, I'll change that
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@JacksonAdamsArt Cute concept!
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About done I think! Any more critiques?
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Looks good I like your color choices
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@JacksonAdamsArt This is such a cute idea!
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@JacksonAdamsArt Such a fun idea!
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@JacksonAdamsArt so cute! For a final tweak, could you vary the width of the light rays coming through the window? Now it looks like the brush size is that and you just went with it. I would fit the rays to be the width of the window with perhaps 1-2 narrower rays
