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    End of the line…wip ^_^

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    • Asyas_illos
      Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

      So I just had brain fart of a whole day yesterday starting with a panic attack fueled morning, and when I was sketching this last night and picking colors I was working on the same layers and it was looking very painterly like my old stuff and completely strayed from how I’ve been working recently. I don’t know what happened but I am really loving it I just hope it still looks somewhat like my style just with bit of a rendering difference? I don’t know what I’m getting at yesterday was just an off day but ended with good artistic choices?

      Anyway….. I’m still working on the same layer with the exception of the weasel which I wanted to ask if it draws too much attention I will do a dark greenish blue wash over once it’s done, just blocked in right now.

      Thanks guys
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      • Miriam
        Miriam @Asyas_illos last edited by Miriam

        @Asyas_illos I didn't see the wall vs. wooden pier posts earlier. I like the stone wall.

        For the piece with the ghost:
        It took me a second to realize it's her own bones.

        Lightening the weasel was a good choice. I don't think it's distracting. But it is bothering me a little that the ghost kind of comes out of its head. Maybe you could try moving the weasel up or down the slope a little bit.

        What's distracting for me is: Why are the bones only partially buried? But I guess that could be part of the story. Maybe she died there, and it got partially covered / scattered over time.

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        • Asyas_illos
          Asyas_illos @Miriam last edited by

          @Miriam thanks I went with that.
          I think I’m done with this one though, I’ve moved on emotionally lol
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          • Chantal Goetheer
            Chantal Goetheer @Asyas_illos last edited by

            @Asyas_illos I really like how she seems to be watering herself and the tree growing from the body. Like the green colours with some red. i wonder if the Robin won't attract too much attention with it's colouring. The background might be darker to give more contrast with the ghost? I like the Wessel looking in, but indeed maybe putting it more up? How many have you made this slowember? 😂 Kamari sure has a slow start but brings lots of inspiration in the end, lol.

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            • Asyas_illos
              Asyas_illos @Miriam last edited by

              @Miriam yes it’s not a grave it’s where she died and the now the forest is sort of reclaiming them? New life springing from her bones, it’s not an immediate new beginning hope that doesn’t make a difference in the judging.

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              • Asyas_illos
                Asyas_illos @Chantal Goetheer last edited by

                @Chantal-Goetheer if you’re new here you’ll come to know this is how I roll, lol it takes me a few illos to warm up, before my better ideas begin to emerge. I don’t slow lol if I slow I lose interest and forget how I’m doing things, it’s a mess!😂

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                • Asyas_illos
                  Asyas_illos last edited by

                  I think I broke, I don’t know what I’m doing anymore! I think I might be overworking it at this point… I don’t usually do so much detail, so I’m not sure where to cut it off. Wtf is going on?!😂🤪
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                  • AngelinaKizz
                    AngelinaKizz last edited by

                    Growth? It’s definitely not a bad thing, I love the textures you’ve got in this one. It’s quite stunning. Keep going, see where it leads you!

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                    • mzameckaart
                      mzameckaart @Asyas_illos last edited by

                      @Asyas_illos I feel like the most recognizable thing in your style is the way the characters look, so even if you make a more painterly piece, it will still be easy to tell it's yours 🙂
                      And I really like this painterly one! A bit dark, but personally I love that 😊
                      Good decision to cut the weasel in my opinion.

                      And I agree with @Chantal-Goetheer this Kamari prompt indeed has a slow start, not much happening in it's forum thread even now! So I wonder if everyone will post there suddenly on the last day? I guess it means it's a tricky one 😃

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                      • Miriam
                        Miriam @Asyas_illos last edited by

                        @Asyas_illos Oh, I liked the weasel (just not where it lined up). I also liked the bottom of the ghost going to a wispy point in the previous version.

                        I like the details you are adding. It's fun to see you experiment with doing something a little different. Both styles look good, and I agree with @mzameckaart that this is still recognizable as your style. It seems like a variation on what you usually do. Keep going with it. I think it will turn out great!

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                        • ajillustrates
                          ajillustrates @Asyas_illos last edited by

                          @Asyas_illos I LOVE how this turned out. If you ever offer this as a print, count me in for a purchase.

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                          • Asyas_illos
                            Asyas_illos @ajillustrates last edited by

                            @ajillustrates thanks! Um, which one? Lol! I’ve never done prints before but my sister and I have plans for an Etsy shop in the future so I’ll keep y’all posted.

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                            • ajillustrates
                              ajillustrates @Asyas_illos last edited by

                              @Asyas_illos The cat leaping to the fisherman - it came out great.

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                              • Asyas_illos
                                Asyas_illos @mzameckaart last edited by

                                @mzameckaart thanks I appreciate your feedback, I might replace the weasel with some more little birds instead. And I’m glad I’m not the only one who was stumped by this prompt!

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                                • Asyas_illos
                                  Asyas_illos @ajillustrates last edited by

                                  @ajillustrates gotcha thank you I’m quite proud of it too!

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                                  • Asyas_illos
                                    Asyas_illos @Miriam last edited by

                                    @Miriam thanks!

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                                    • marek.halko
                                      marek.halko @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                      @Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz Thanks guys! I am just lazy to do complicated things though🙂. Published? No,no, i am still miles away to get even a portfolio out😀.

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                                      • Asyas_illos
                                        Asyas_illos last edited by

                                        Still working on this, I think some details to small tree and then to the ghost. Then maybe some more critters and I’ll be done.
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                                        • Asyas_illos
                                          Asyas_illos last edited by

                                          Got another color choice here
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                                          • Asyas_illos
                                            Asyas_illos last edited by

                                            I think I’m staying with this color palette, and I’ve added some critters what do you guys think? I feel like it might be becoming to busy, I’m getting that itch to start completely over…
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