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    • Jeremy Ross
      Jeremy Ross @AngelinaKizz last edited by

      Thank you @AngelinaKizz, appreciate your feedback!

      Thank you @KevinTreaccar, I miss the red too, maybe I’ll try it in the background to increase the intensity.

      Thank you @Chantal-Goetheer, I completely agree!

      Thank you @Frogpunzel , definitely going to play around with it to sneak a little color in.

      Appreciate everyone’s feedback; love this community ❤️

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        Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Jeremy Ross last edited by

        @Jeremy-Ross i love the redo

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          Jeremy Ross @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

          Thank you @Nyrryl-Cadiz!

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            • Jeremy Ross
              Jeremy Ross @Guest last edited by

              Hi @Stephanie-H, good point. I did think about adding in the big rabbit’s ears to fit it in. You read my mind. I was going for cinematic partial on screen, partially out of screen, but I’ll try both to see how it turns out.

              Thanks!

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              • Griffin McPherson
                Griffin McPherson @Jeremy Ross last edited by

                @Jeremy-Ross values are much more clear but I think you should still have some color. I love the the foot sticking out to kick the bike but I actually didn’t notice it at first so maybe to make it more clear you could lighten the background behind where the leg is.

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                  Jeremy Ross @Griffin McPherson last edited by

                  Hi @Griffin-McPherson, @Stephanie-H, @KevinTreaccar, @Chantal-Goetheer,

                  What do you think about the 3rd revision with some color and full circle showing big bad bunny ears?

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                  • KevinTreaccar
                    KevinTreaccar @Jeremy Ross last edited by

                    @Jeremy-Ross Love it. Feels just as clear as the original update, and the updated color is definitely adding energy.

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                    • Chantal Goetheer
                      Chantal Goetheer @Jeremy Ross last edited by

                      @Jeremy-Ross Love to see his big bunny ears fully and to see the colour returning! The little dirty leg pops out better this way too. I do wonder how it would look if the bunnies wouldn't have the additional colours they have now? And/or with a slightly brighter more argressive red as in the original version? But it looks great alreay. My mind never stops wondering how would it look like when...

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                        A Former User @Jeremy Ross last edited by

                        @Jeremy-Ross It looks good with the ears all the way in the illustration!

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