Kamari WIP - feedback welcome
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@Anna-Lindsay I think this reads pretty well. It’s sad that Kamari is leaving the people who took care of them but happy because they’re being released into the wild and will soon find a new family.
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@Griffin-McPherson Thank you Griffin! Exactly what I was going for, phew! So glad it makes sense, can't be sure sometimes when you've stared at something too long lol
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@Anna-Lindsay oh I know that feeling haha
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@Anna-Lindsay oh, I love this concept, and I’m definitely a fan of the quiet storytelling you use here. Can’t wait to see this finished!
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@Mia-Clarke Thank you so much Mia! Hope I have time to finish it
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@Anna-Lindsay Your concept is very clear! Kamari is a being released back into the wild, saying good-buy to one life and friends and ready to enter another.
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@Anna-Lindsay Ohh! I love your idea!
I think it's a perfect solution to the prompt.Yes, the concept was immediately clear to me.
A wildlife rescue group was caring for Kamari, and now the leopard is being released into the wild. Kamari looks a little hesitant to leave the friends that took care of him/her, but is still on the way to a new life.
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@Anna-Lindsay Great idea and I instantly understood it. Looking forwar to seeing it in colour.
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Great idea, reads clearly @Anna-Lindsay!
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I love this
