Kumari WIP
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@ArtistErin this looks really good I’m glad you did away with “the body” lol. I do think the crabs clutter it a bit though.
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Awesome... thank you 
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@ArtistErin I think remove the text on the boat. I made me think Kamari is the boat name instead of the boy. Your story is much clearer without!
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@ArtMelC Thank you
I guess the text does confuse, I learned about naming boats and ships- one does put their own name and location on their boat but in this way it feels like the boat is the character named Kamari and not the kid.
This prompt has turned me inside out! Thanks for your insight...
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@LittleRaven Thank you! LOL I tried changing the bird's position to give variation and didn't realize until you pointed it out how he looks in the wrong direction. Trying to not have to redraw him. So much for the lazy approach!
