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NEED ART FOR SVS YOUTUBE CRITS!

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  • brettb_draws
    brettb_draws last edited by 3 Jan 2023, 09:25

    @Lee-White @Jake-Parker @Will-Terry
    I'd love to get your feedback on this one that I did earlier in the year! I was really happy with the concept and rendering but feel that the storytelling, and lighting could have been improved. I believe this was for the tiger prompt.

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    • Lee White
      Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by 19 Jan 2023, 17:25

      We are doing a new episode of How to fix Your Art today so I wanted to bump this thread up! Keep submitting as we are going through all of these to find the ones to use for each episode. : )

      SVS Faculty Instructor
      www.leewhiteillustration.com

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      • Mia Clarke
        Mia Clarke @Lee White last edited by 19 Jan 2023, 17:43

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        • Asyas_illos
          Asyas_illos last edited by 19 Jan 2023, 18:56

          F88A47EF-96A3-41E5-9E30-AFA6BBA906D6.jpeg I’ve been struggling with this one!

          Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
          www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
          https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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          • Tom Harshberger
            Tom Harshberger last edited by 20 Jan 2023, 18:08

            I would love some advice on how to control the texture to draw the eye in without characters looking to clean in contrast. Or any advice really 🙂

            Untitled_Artwork 2.JPG

            instagram.com/tomharshberger.art

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            • kayleenartlover
              kayleenartlover last edited by 20 Jan 2023, 19:10

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              • kayleenartlover
                kayleenartlover last edited by 20 Jan 2023, 19:13

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                • Erichousel
                  Erichousel @Lee White last edited by 21 Jan 2023, 20:02

                  @Lee-White @Jake-Parker I was happy to see Jake critique one of my illustrations in the #4 video on characters. I loved the info and found it very useful. Thanks guys!

                  Eric Housel

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                  • brettb_draws
                    brettb_draws @Erichousel last edited by 22 Jan 2023, 12:26

                    Does anyone know where I can view the videos? It's says they're private on YouTube

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                    • Asyas_illos
                      Asyas_illos @brettb_draws last edited by 22 Jan 2023, 17:06

                      @brettb_draws I believe on YouTube they are only available for the next 24 hours, after that, if you’re an svs subscriber I think they are uploaded to the curriculum somewhere… I haven’t looked for them myself so I can’t tell you where exactly

                      Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
                      www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
                      https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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                        A Former User @brettb_draws last edited by 22 Jan 2023, 17:39

                        @brettb_draws I'd also be curious where these are living in the curriculum 🙂 I missed the most recent one!

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                          A Former User @Guest last edited by 22 Jan 2023, 22:37

                          @ashleegoovaerts I'm in the same situation as well.

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                          • Christijan
                            Christijan last edited by 23 Jan 2023, 04:14

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                            @Lee-White

                            If you're still doing critiques, this one is in need of some expert advice!

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                            • MimiHecher
                              MimiHecher last edited by 24 Feb 2023, 22:08

                              Happy to offer you something to explain how to NOT do it. 😃

                              Gratitude-pg-0607.jpg

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                                Heather Foxwood last edited by 2 Mar 2023, 13:29

                                ElephantandMousecompressed.jpg If you are still doing critiques I'd love input on what could be done to improve this!

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                                  Heather Foxwood @Guest last edited by 2 Mar 2023, 13:29

                                  @ashleegoovaerts I'd like to know too!

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                                  • von_Nimmermehr
                                    von_Nimmermehr @Heather Foxwood last edited by 2 Mar 2023, 17:22

                                    @ashleegoovaerts @Asyas_illos @Heather-Foxwood The How to Fix Ur Art is not under the curriculum just go on all courses and for me (i bet the order is different from computer to computer) its one of the first pictures shown. if not just type it in to the search field

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                                    Website: www.von-Nimmermehr.com
                                    Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/von_nimmermehr_illustration/

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                                    • Geoffrey Mégardon
                                      Geoffrey Mégardon last edited by 2 Mar 2023, 18:17

                                      This is one of my latest piece, I tried a lot of different compositions, and I would love your opinion / critique.
                                      Portfolio01-aJohn_space_tentacle2-95.jpg

                                      Not sure how many we can post, but I have a lot of recent work as I was working on my portfolio 😃

                                      Find me on Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nodragem/
                                      Portfolio: https://www.nodragemillustration.com

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                                      • Kristen Lango
                                        Kristen Lango last edited by 2 Mar 2023, 20:45

                                        SpaceMeetsSea_v2_Websize.jpg
                                        If you guys need more art to critique! I'd love some feedback on this one.

                                        https://www.kristenlango.com/
                                        https://www.instagram.com/kristendraws/

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                                        • NickyDrew
                                          NickyDrew last edited by 3 Mar 2023, 02:21

                                          Hi, I don't know if you're still looking for art to critique, but if you are, I'd love some help with this piece. It's a picture book cover mock-up from my portfolio. Other than my terrible attempts at painting dappled sunlight, I can't figure out why the illustration's not working. Any help would be super appreciated!
                                          cover mockup.jpg

                                          Portfolio: www.nickydrewillustration.com

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