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    NEED ART FOR SVS YOUTUBE CRITS!

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    • J
      JennyJones last edited by

      Here is a piece I did using a collage technique. I drew some, photographed some physical items and imported them, and also used some digital layering tricks. My take on the three little pigs.

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      Thanks for offering the opportunity for scrutiny. I love the style of artists like Melissa Sweet and Emily Gravitt with their collage looking pieces. I am trying to get a similar look to my work.

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        Kim Rosenlof @JennyJones last edited by

        @JennyJones I really like this. Nice job with the collage. The expressions on the pigs are great.

        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kiminyrose/

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        • von_Nimmermehr
          von_Nimmermehr last edited by von_Nimmermehr

          i don't know if i'm to late but i will leave this here.

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          Website: www.von-Nimmermehr.com
          Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/von_nimmermehr_illustration/

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          • Heather Boyd
            Heather Boyd @von_Nimmermehr last edited by

            @von_Nimmermehr This is so wonderful! Concept with ocean waves in the tree. Wow wow! I like how you think. 🙂

            Instagram: www.instagram.com/heatherboyd.illustration/
            Website: https://heatherboydillustration.ca
            Shop: https://www.inprnt.com/search/products?q=HeatherBoydIllustration
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            Be blessed,

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              JennyJones @Kim Rosenlof last edited by

              @Kim-Rosenlof , thanks. It was a new way to do things for me. It was a first and it took forever. But I learned a lot. Next time will be a little bit quicker…I hope.

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              • von_Nimmermehr
                von_Nimmermehr @Heather Boyd last edited by

                @Heather-Boyd Thank you so much 🙂

                Website: www.von-Nimmermehr.com
                Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/von_nimmermehr_illustration/

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                • KatrinaF
                  KatrinaF @Lee White last edited by

                  @Lee-White
                  Hey Lee! Katrina here. I'd love to get some feed back on this piece. Thx

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                    Maureen*Henry*Artist @Lee White last edited by

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                    would love a critique

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                    • kayleenartlover
                      kayleenartlover @Lee White last edited by

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                      I am planning on redrawing this piece since it is nearly a year old. I would love to get a critique on it before I recreate it.

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                      • brettb_draws
                        brettb_draws last edited by

                        @Lee-White @Jake-Parker @Will-Terry
                        I'd love to get your feedback on this one that I did earlier in the year! I was really happy with the concept and rendering but feel that the storytelling, and lighting could have been improved. I believe this was for the tiger prompt.

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                        • Lee White
                          Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

                          We are doing a new episode of How to fix Your Art today so I wanted to bump this thread up! Keep submitting as we are going through all of these to find the ones to use for each episode. : )

                          SVS Faculty Instructor
                          www.leewhiteillustration.com

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                            • Asyas_illos
                              Asyas_illos last edited by

                              F88A47EF-96A3-41E5-9E30-AFA6BBA906D6.jpeg I’ve been struggling with this one!

                              Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
                              www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
                              https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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                              • Tom Harshberger
                                Tom Harshberger last edited by

                                I would love some advice on how to control the texture to draw the eye in without characters looking to clean in contrast. Or any advice really 🙂

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                                instagram.com/tomharshberger.art

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                                    • Erichousel
                                      Erichousel @Lee White last edited by

                                      @Lee-White @Jake-Parker I was happy to see Jake critique one of my illustrations in the #4 video on characters. I loved the info and found it very useful. Thanks guys!

                                      Eric Housel

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                                      • brettb_draws
                                        brettb_draws @Erichousel last edited by

                                        Does anyone know where I can view the videos? It's says they're private on YouTube

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                                          Asyas_illos @brettb_draws last edited by

                                          @brettb_draws I believe on YouTube they are only available for the next 24 hours, after that, if you’re an svs subscriber I think they are uploaded to the curriculum somewhere… I haven’t looked for them myself so I can’t tell you where exactly

                                          Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
                                          www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
                                          https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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                                            A Former User @brettb_draws last edited by

                                            @brettb_draws I'd also be curious where these are living in the curriculum 🙂 I missed the most recent one!

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