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    NEED ART FOR SVS YOUTUBE CRITS!

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    • ArtistErin
      ArtistErin last edited by

      Yes please!!! Working on a re-draw of the classic "The Velveteen Rabbit" and trying to develop compositions that are dynamic without being too busy... I'd love a critique! Thank you so much 🙂

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      Erin Richardson
      instagram.com/erinrichardsondesigns21
      www.erinrichardsondesigns.com

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      • Gabby Correia
        Gabby Correia last edited by

        This one was from my very first prompt I did for SVS "Dragonfly"
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        https://linktr.ee/gabby_correia

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        • Alexe53
          Alexe53 last edited by

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            JennyJones @Lee White last edited by

            @Lee-White Here is one that I did of the poem “The Owl and the Pussy Cat”. 527ECFF8-70A0-4C43-99AF-DC04DF7992A5.jpeg

            When I made it I was satisfied and thought it would be a good portfolio piece. But now it seems like something is off. Help?

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              JennyJones last edited by

              Here is a piece I did using a collage technique. I drew some, photographed some physical items and imported them, and also used some digital layering tricks. My take on the three little pigs.

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              Thanks for offering the opportunity for scrutiny. I love the style of artists like Melissa Sweet and Emily Gravitt with their collage looking pieces. I am trying to get a similar look to my work.

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              • Kim Rosenlof
                Kim Rosenlof @JennyJones last edited by

                @JennyJones I really like this. Nice job with the collage. The expressions on the pigs are great.

                Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kiminyrose/

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                • von_Nimmermehr
                  von_Nimmermehr last edited by von_Nimmermehr

                  i don't know if i'm to late but i will leave this here.

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                  Website: www.von-Nimmermehr.com
                  Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/von_nimmermehr_illustration/

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                  • Heather Boyd
                    Heather Boyd @von_Nimmermehr last edited by

                    @von_Nimmermehr This is so wonderful! Concept with ocean waves in the tree. Wow wow! I like how you think. 🙂

                    Instagram: www.instagram.com/heatherboyd.illustration/
                    Website: https://heatherboydillustration.ca
                    Shop: https://www.inprnt.com/search/products?q=HeatherBoydIllustration
                    Ko-Fi: https://ko-fi.com/heatherboydillustration

                    Be blessed,

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                      JennyJones @Kim Rosenlof last edited by

                      @Kim-Rosenlof , thanks. It was a new way to do things for me. It was a first and it took forever. But I learned a lot. Next time will be a little bit quicker…I hope.

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                      • von_Nimmermehr
                        von_Nimmermehr @Heather Boyd last edited by

                        @Heather-Boyd Thank you so much 🙂

                        Website: www.von-Nimmermehr.com
                        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/von_nimmermehr_illustration/

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                        • KatrinaF
                          KatrinaF @Lee White last edited by

                          @Lee-White
                          Hey Lee! Katrina here. I'd love to get some feed back on this piece. Thx

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                          • Maureen*Henry*Artist
                            Maureen*Henry*Artist @Lee White last edited by

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                            would love a critique

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                            • kayleenartlover
                              kayleenartlover @Lee White last edited by

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                              I am planning on redrawing this piece since it is nearly a year old. I would love to get a critique on it before I recreate it.

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                              • brettb_draws
                                brettb_draws last edited by

                                @Lee-White @Jake-Parker @Will-Terry
                                I'd love to get your feedback on this one that I did earlier in the year! I was really happy with the concept and rendering but feel that the storytelling, and lighting could have been improved. I believe this was for the tiger prompt.

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                                • Lee White
                                  Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                  We are doing a new episode of How to fix Your Art today so I wanted to bump this thread up! Keep submitting as we are going through all of these to find the ones to use for each episode. : )

                                  SVS Faculty Instructor
                                  www.leewhiteillustration.com

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                                    Mia Clarke @Lee White last edited by

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                                    • Asyas_illos
                                      Asyas_illos last edited by

                                      F88A47EF-96A3-41E5-9E30-AFA6BBA906D6.jpeg I’ve been struggling with this one!

                                      Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
                                      www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
                                      https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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                                      • Tom Harshberger
                                        Tom Harshberger last edited by

                                        I would love some advice on how to control the texture to draw the eye in without characters looking to clean in contrast. Or any advice really 🙂

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                                        instagram.com/tomharshberger.art

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                                        • kayleenartlover
                                          kayleenartlover last edited by

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