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    NEED ART FOR SVS YOUTUBE CRITS!

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    • Lee White
      Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

      These are all great! I see so many great things going on in all of them. The good thing about this lecture series we are doing is we are looking at very specific things in each image. So an image may be working overall, and just need help in one or two specific areas.

      So please remember that if you see one of your images and we say it could use improvement in a specific area. : )

      We still have at least 7 more of these lectures, so please paste as many images in here as you like! I'm using a smattering of them in the lecture today. I really appreciate you guys putting yourself out there and being open to crits and feedback!

      SVS Faculty Instructor
      www.leewhiteillustration.com

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      • Asyas_illos
        Asyas_illos @Lee White last edited by

        @Lee-White hi is there a link somewhere to attend or do we just hop over to YouTube at a certain time?

        Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
        www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
        https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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        • LisaF
          LisaF SVS Team SVS OG @Asyas_illos last edited by

          @Asyas_illos Hi! You can find it here: https://youtu.be/nM_WqCTeZ4o ๐Ÿ˜

          Director of Sunshine and Rainbows
          lisa@svslearn.com

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          • Lee White
            Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG @LisaF last edited by

            Thanks everyone! Keep posting to this thread if you want to appear on future crits!

            SVS Faculty Instructor
            www.leewhiteillustration.com

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            • ArtistErin
              ArtistErin last edited by

              Yes please!!! Working on a re-draw of the classic "The Velveteen Rabbit" and trying to develop compositions that are dynamic without being too busy... I'd love a critique! Thank you so much ๐Ÿ™‚

              Wheelbarrow and Boy Final.jpg

              Erin Richardson
              instagram.com/erinrichardsondesigns21
              www.erinrichardsondesigns.com

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              • Gabby Correia
                Gabby Correia last edited by

                This one was from my very first prompt I did for SVS "Dragonfly"
                dragonfly_web.jpg

                https://linktr.ee/gabby_correia

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                • Alexe53
                  Alexe53 last edited by

                  Darker Final (5).jpg

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                    JennyJones @Lee White last edited by

                    @Lee-White Here is one that I did of the poem โ€œThe Owl and the Pussy Catโ€. 527ECFF8-70A0-4C43-99AF-DC04DF7992A5.jpeg

                    When I made it I was satisfied and thought it would be a good portfolio piece. But now it seems like something is off. Help?

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                    • J
                      JennyJones last edited by

                      Here is a piece I did using a collage technique. I drew some, photographed some physical items and imported them, and also used some digital layering tricks. My take on the three little pigs.

                      BF4C0916-BE38-4919-8B74-D5894F455256.jpeg

                      Thanks for offering the opportunity for scrutiny. I love the style of artists like Melissa Sweet and Emily Gravitt with their collage looking pieces. I am trying to get a similar look to my work.

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                      • Kim Rosenlof
                        Kim Rosenlof @JennyJones last edited by

                        @JennyJones I really like this. Nice job with the collage. The expressions on the pigs are great.

                        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kiminyrose/

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                        • von_Nimmermehr
                          von_Nimmermehr last edited by von_Nimmermehr

                          i don't know if i'm to late but i will leave this here.

                          Julia_Nowak_fix_art.png

                          Website: www.von-Nimmermehr.com
                          Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/von_nimmermehr_illustration/

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                          • Heather Boyd
                            Heather Boyd @von_Nimmermehr last edited by

                            @von_Nimmermehr This is so wonderful! Concept with ocean waves in the tree. Wow wow! I like how you think. ๐Ÿ™‚

                            Instagram: www.instagram.com/heatherboyd.illustration/
                            Website: https://heatherboydillustration.ca
                            Shop: https://www.inprnt.com/search/products?q=HeatherBoydIllustration
                            Ko-Fi: https://ko-fi.com/heatherboydillustration

                            Be blessed,

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                              JennyJones @Kim Rosenlof last edited by

                              @Kim-Rosenlof , thanks. It was a new way to do things for me. It was a first and it took forever. But I learned a lot. Next time will be a little bit quickerโ€ฆI hope.

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                              • von_Nimmermehr
                                von_Nimmermehr @Heather Boyd last edited by

                                @Heather-Boyd Thank you so much ๐Ÿ™‚

                                Website: www.von-Nimmermehr.com
                                Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/von_nimmermehr_illustration/

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                                • KatrinaF
                                  KatrinaF @Lee White last edited by

                                  @Lee-White
                                  Hey Lee! Katrina here. I'd love to get some feed back on this piece. Thx

                                  Capture.JPG

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                                  • Maureen*Henry*Artist
                                    Maureen*Henry*Artist @Lee White last edited by

                                    @Lee-White D13F879B-7CEB-4A97-98D0-52CB3C28254E.jpeg 9BAEF52A-3BD2-4A23-9948-A9AC21F41456.jpeg

                                    would love a critique

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                                    • kayleenartlover
                                      kayleenartlover @Lee White last edited by

                                      @Lee-White Kayleen_Sokol_Jan_2022.jpg
                                      I am planning on redrawing this piece since it is nearly a year old. I would love to get a critique on it before I recreate it.

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                                      • brettb_draws
                                        brettb_draws last edited by

                                        @Lee-White @Jake-Parker @Will-Terry
                                        I'd love to get your feedback on this one that I did earlier in the year! I was really happy with the concept and rendering but feel that the storytelling, and lighting could have been improved. I believe this was for the tiger prompt.

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                                        • Lee White
                                          Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                          We are doing a new episode of How to fix Your Art today so I wanted to bump this thread up! Keep submitting as we are going through all of these to find the ones to use for each episode. : )

                                          SVS Faculty Instructor
                                          www.leewhiteillustration.com

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