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    • Bibi Senthi
      Bibi Senthi last edited by

      Yes please. Feel free to use my critique arena entry!

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      Love the how to fix your art series. SO helpful!

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      • ArtMelC
        ArtMelC last edited by

        Feel free to use my past entries 🙂
        Melissa-Candrasaputra-Oct2022.jpg
        Where+are+my+glasses+(1) (1).jpg
        Melissa-candrasaputra-sep2022-v2.jpg

        www.instagram.com/art.melc.illo/
        www.artmelc.com
        I write weekly on mondayblues.substack.com

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          Frogpunzel last edited by Frogpunzel

          Here are a few, really enjoying Fix My Art!
          glow wip done.jpg May- Storm.jpg Riley's Garage flattened 2.jpg Heather Case September 2022 Submission.jpg

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          • ACPetullo
            ACPetullo last edited by ACPetullo

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            Fix away! ❤️‍🩹

            www.acpillo.com

            www.instagram.com/acp.illo/

            ACP

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            • MarcRobinson
              MarcRobinson last edited by

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              This is a book cover idea I had. Never done a cover like this before. Please fix away!

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              • Kim Rosenlof
                Kim Rosenlof last edited by

                It may be too late to do this, but just in case, here is mine.

                Kim_Rosenlof_July22.jpg

                Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kiminyrose/

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                • Norman Morana
                  Norman Morana last edited by

                  A couple areas I find difficult are dusk/night lighting and getting plenty of life in an illustration. I made this piece to work on those areas and I think there is plenty of room for improvement.

                  NormanMorana_CritPiece.jpg

                  Onwards,

                  Norman

                  normanmoranaillustration.com
                  instagram.com/norman_morana/

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                  • Lee White
                    Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

                    These are all great! I see so many great things going on in all of them. The good thing about this lecture series we are doing is we are looking at very specific things in each image. So an image may be working overall, and just need help in one or two specific areas.

                    So please remember that if you see one of your images and we say it could use improvement in a specific area. : )

                    We still have at least 7 more of these lectures, so please paste as many images in here as you like! I'm using a smattering of them in the lecture today. I really appreciate you guys putting yourself out there and being open to crits and feedback!

                    SVS Faculty Instructor
                    www.leewhiteillustration.com

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                    • Asyas_illos
                      Asyas_illos @Lee White last edited by

                      @Lee-White hi is there a link somewhere to attend or do we just hop over to YouTube at a certain time?

                      Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
                      www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
                      https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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                      • LisaF
                        LisaF SVS Team SVS OG @Asyas_illos last edited by

                        @Asyas_illos Hi! You can find it here: https://youtu.be/nM_WqCTeZ4o 😁

                        Director of Sunshine and Rainbows
                        lisa@svslearn.com

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                        • Lee White
                          Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG @LisaF last edited by

                          Thanks everyone! Keep posting to this thread if you want to appear on future crits!

                          SVS Faculty Instructor
                          www.leewhiteillustration.com

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                          • ArtistErin
                            ArtistErin last edited by

                            Yes please!!! Working on a re-draw of the classic "The Velveteen Rabbit" and trying to develop compositions that are dynamic without being too busy... I'd love a critique! Thank you so much 🙂

                            Wheelbarrow and Boy Final.jpg

                            Erin Richardson
                            instagram.com/erinrichardsondesigns21
                            www.erinrichardsondesigns.com

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                            • Gabby Correia
                              Gabby Correia last edited by

                              This one was from my very first prompt I did for SVS "Dragonfly"
                              dragonfly_web.jpg

                              https://linktr.ee/gabby_correia

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                              • Alexe53
                                Alexe53 last edited by

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                                  JennyJones @Lee White last edited by

                                  @Lee-White Here is one that I did of the poem “The Owl and the Pussy Cat”. 527ECFF8-70A0-4C43-99AF-DC04DF7992A5.jpeg

                                  When I made it I was satisfied and thought it would be a good portfolio piece. But now it seems like something is off. Help?

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                                    JennyJones last edited by

                                    Here is a piece I did using a collage technique. I drew some, photographed some physical items and imported them, and also used some digital layering tricks. My take on the three little pigs.

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                                    Thanks for offering the opportunity for scrutiny. I love the style of artists like Melissa Sweet and Emily Gravitt with their collage looking pieces. I am trying to get a similar look to my work.

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                                    • Kim Rosenlof
                                      Kim Rosenlof @JennyJones last edited by

                                      @JennyJones I really like this. Nice job with the collage. The expressions on the pigs are great.

                                      Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kiminyrose/

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                                      • von_Nimmermehr
                                        von_Nimmermehr last edited by von_Nimmermehr

                                        i don't know if i'm to late but i will leave this here.

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                                        Website: www.von-Nimmermehr.com
                                        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/von_nimmermehr_illustration/

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                                        • Heather Boyd
                                          Heather Boyd @von_Nimmermehr last edited by

                                          @von_Nimmermehr This is so wonderful! Concept with ocean waves in the tree. Wow wow! I like how you think. 🙂

                                          Instagram: www.instagram.com/heatherboyd.illustration/
                                          Website: https://heatherboydillustration.ca
                                          Shop: https://www.inprnt.com/search/products?q=HeatherBoydIllustration
                                          Ko-Fi: https://ko-fi.com/heatherboydillustration

                                          Be blessed,

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                                            JennyJones @Kim Rosenlof last edited by

                                            @Kim-Rosenlof , thanks. It was a new way to do things for me. It was a first and it took forever. But I learned a lot. Next time will be a little bit quicker…I hope.

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