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    • Erichousel
      Erichousel last edited by

      Here's a few more I'd be interested in hearing about.

      Mars-Eats-Earth.jpg

      Christmas-Owl.jpg

      Binky Suit.jpg

      Eric Housel

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      • Jean Watson
        Jean Watson last edited by

        My first ever critique arena submission and second ever digital illustration! So tons to fix - possibly too much for the purpose! This one relates to this month's prompt “Kamari had come to the end of the road. Or was it a new beginning?” So I’ve gone for a young barn owl on his first flight. Had plans for a flight school scenario complete with pilot goggles, air Marshall signalling, flight path, flight school banner etc but in the end ditched that and went for something simpler and quieter.

        jean-watson-nov2022.jpg

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        • jvartandillustration
          jvartandillustration last edited by

          I just finished a piece, and would love a critique. Thank you!Disaster.JPG

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          • kirsten-mcg
            kirsten-mcg last edited by

            This is an older one, but I would love to know how I could have done better with the storytelling and composition. Dragon Storm.jpeg

            Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kirsten.mcgonigal.art/
            Portfolio Site: www.kirstenmcgonigalart.com

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            • Jeremy Ross
              Jeremy Ross @Lee White last edited by

              Por favor!
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              https://www.instagram.com/jeremyrayross
              https://www.jeremyrayross.com/
              https://twitter.com/jeremyrayross
              https://jeremyrayross.substack.com/

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              • Sarah VanDam
                Sarah VanDam last edited by Sarah VanDam

                This is a page spread that I did for my BFA project. Seriously want to revisit the idea I had for this project at some point, but with a clean slate.

                8BF6F8D5-4EA8-423A-A072-E40DA3480E67.jpeg

                https://sarahvandam.art/
                Instagram: @sarahvandam.art and @artistsandbox.etsy

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                • Bibi Senthi
                  Bibi Senthi last edited by

                  Yes please. Feel free to use my critique arena entry!

                  SVSLEARN_Nov2022.jpg

                  Love the how to fix your art series. SO helpful!

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                  • ArtMelC
                    ArtMelC last edited by

                    Feel free to use my past entries 🙂
                    Melissa-Candrasaputra-Oct2022.jpg
                    Where+are+my+glasses+(1) (1).jpg
                    Melissa-candrasaputra-sep2022-v2.jpg

                    www.instagram.com/art.melc.illo/
                    www.artmelc.com
                    I write weekly on mondayblues.substack.com

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                    • F
                      Frogpunzel last edited by Frogpunzel

                      Here are a few, really enjoying Fix My Art!
                      glow wip done.jpg May- Storm.jpg Riley's Garage flattened 2.jpg Heather Case September 2022 Submission.jpg

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                      • ACPetullo
                        ACPetullo last edited by ACPetullo

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                        Fix away! ❤️‍🩹

                        www.acpillo.com

                        www.instagram.com/acp.illo/

                        ACP

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                        • MarcRobinson
                          MarcRobinson last edited by

                          Cover Low Res.jpg

                          This is a book cover idea I had. Never done a cover like this before. Please fix away!

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                          • Kim Rosenlof
                            Kim Rosenlof last edited by

                            It may be too late to do this, but just in case, here is mine.

                            Kim_Rosenlof_July22.jpg

                            Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kiminyrose/

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                            • Norman Morana
                              Norman Morana last edited by

                              A couple areas I find difficult are dusk/night lighting and getting plenty of life in an illustration. I made this piece to work on those areas and I think there is plenty of room for improvement.

                              NormanMorana_CritPiece.jpg

                              Onwards,

                              Norman

                              normanmoranaillustration.com
                              instagram.com/norman_morana/

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                              • Lee White
                                Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                These are all great! I see so many great things going on in all of them. The good thing about this lecture series we are doing is we are looking at very specific things in each image. So an image may be working overall, and just need help in one or two specific areas.

                                So please remember that if you see one of your images and we say it could use improvement in a specific area. : )

                                We still have at least 7 more of these lectures, so please paste as many images in here as you like! I'm using a smattering of them in the lecture today. I really appreciate you guys putting yourself out there and being open to crits and feedback!

                                SVS Faculty Instructor
                                www.leewhiteillustration.com

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                                • Asyas_illos
                                  Asyas_illos @Lee White last edited by

                                  @Lee-White hi is there a link somewhere to attend or do we just hop over to YouTube at a certain time?

                                  Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
                                  www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
                                  https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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                                  • LisaF
                                    LisaF SVS Team SVS OG @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                    @Asyas_illos Hi! You can find it here: https://youtu.be/nM_WqCTeZ4o 😁

                                    Director of Sunshine and Rainbows
                                    lisa@svslearn.com

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                                    • Lee White
                                      Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG @LisaF last edited by

                                      Thanks everyone! Keep posting to this thread if you want to appear on future crits!

                                      SVS Faculty Instructor
                                      www.leewhiteillustration.com

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                                      • ArtistErin
                                        ArtistErin last edited by

                                        Yes please!!! Working on a re-draw of the classic "The Velveteen Rabbit" and trying to develop compositions that are dynamic without being too busy... I'd love a critique! Thank you so much 🙂

                                        Wheelbarrow and Boy Final.jpg

                                        Erin Richardson
                                        instagram.com/erinrichardsondesigns21
                                        www.erinrichardsondesigns.com

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                                        • Gabby Correia
                                          Gabby Correia last edited by

                                          This one was from my very first prompt I did for SVS "Dragonfly"
                                          dragonfly_web.jpg

                                          https://linktr.ee/gabby_correia

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                                          • Alexe53
                                            Alexe53 last edited by

                                            Darker Final (5).jpg

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