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      A Former User last edited by

      Would love any and all critiquing 🙂 I learn so much from everything SVS!!

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      • Lee White
        Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

        Thanks you guys! keep em' coming!

        SVS Faculty Instructor
        www.leewhiteillustration.com

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        • Erichousel
          Erichousel last edited by

          Any crits from you guys are good crits. Always welcome.
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          • Katherine
            Katherine last edited by

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            Thanks Lee — I'm planning on spending a day on this soon to fix all the issues so a critique would be amazing!

            the site: katherinetyson.com
            instagram: instagram.com/katherinetysonart

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            • Erichousel
              Erichousel last edited by

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              • AngelinaKizz
                AngelinaKizz last edited by

                I would love a critique on Riley, even though it’s older, I would love to know how I could have done better with all the “disaster” in the garage, and the rendering.
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                www.evarartistry.com
                www.Instagram.com/evarartistry/

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                • Erichousel
                  Erichousel last edited by

                  Here's a few more I'd be interested in hearing about.

                  Mars-Eats-Earth.jpg

                  Christmas-Owl.jpg

                  Binky Suit.jpg

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                  • Jean Watson
                    Jean Watson last edited by

                    My first ever critique arena submission and second ever digital illustration! So tons to fix - possibly too much for the purpose! This one relates to this month's prompt “Kamari had come to the end of the road. Or was it a new beginning?” So I’ve gone for a young barn owl on his first flight. Had plans for a flight school scenario complete with pilot goggles, air Marshall signalling, flight path, flight school banner etc but in the end ditched that and went for something simpler and quieter.

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                    • jvartandillustration
                      jvartandillustration last edited by

                      I just finished a piece, and would love a critique. Thank you!Disaster.JPG

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                      • kirsten-mcg
                        kirsten-mcg last edited by

                        This is an older one, but I would love to know how I could have done better with the storytelling and composition. Dragon Storm.jpeg

                        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kirsten.mcgonigal.art/
                        Portfolio Site: www.kirstenmcgonigalart.com

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                        • Jeremy Ross
                          Jeremy Ross @Lee White last edited by

                          Por favor!
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                          https://www.instagram.com/jeremyrayross
                          https://www.jeremyrayross.com/
                          https://twitter.com/jeremyrayross
                          https://jeremyrayross.substack.com/

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                          • Sarah VanDam
                            Sarah VanDam last edited by Sarah VanDam

                            This is a page spread that I did for my BFA project. Seriously want to revisit the idea I had for this project at some point, but with a clean slate.

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                            https://sarahvandam.art/
                            Instagram: @sarahvandam.art and @artistsandbox.etsy

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                            • Bibi Senthi
                              Bibi Senthi last edited by

                              Yes please. Feel free to use my critique arena entry!

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                              Love the how to fix your art series. SO helpful!

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                              • ArtMelC
                                ArtMelC last edited by

                                Feel free to use my past entries 🙂
                                Melissa-Candrasaputra-Oct2022.jpg
                                Where+are+my+glasses+(1) (1).jpg
                                Melissa-candrasaputra-sep2022-v2.jpg

                                www.instagram.com/art.melc.illo/
                                www.artmelc.com
                                I write weekly on mondayblues.substack.com

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                                  Frogpunzel last edited by Frogpunzel

                                  Here are a few, really enjoying Fix My Art!
                                  glow wip done.jpg May- Storm.jpg Riley's Garage flattened 2.jpg Heather Case September 2022 Submission.jpg

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                                  • ACPetullo
                                    ACPetullo last edited by ACPetullo

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                                    Fix away! ❤️‍🩹

                                    www.acpillo.com

                                    www.instagram.com/acp.illo/

                                    ACP

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                                    • MarcRobinson
                                      MarcRobinson last edited by

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                                      This is a book cover idea I had. Never done a cover like this before. Please fix away!

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                                      • Kim Rosenlof
                                        Kim Rosenlof last edited by

                                        It may be too late to do this, but just in case, here is mine.

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                                        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kiminyrose/

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                                        • Norman Morana
                                          Norman Morana last edited by

                                          A couple areas I find difficult are dusk/night lighting and getting plenty of life in an illustration. I made this piece to work on those areas and I think there is plenty of room for improvement.

                                          NormanMorana_CritPiece.jpg

                                          Onwards,

                                          Norman

                                          normanmoranaillustration.com
                                          instagram.com/norman_morana/

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                                          • Lee White
                                            Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                            These are all great! I see so many great things going on in all of them. The good thing about this lecture series we are doing is we are looking at very specific things in each image. So an image may be working overall, and just need help in one or two specific areas.

                                            So please remember that if you see one of your images and we say it could use improvement in a specific area. : )

                                            We still have at least 7 more of these lectures, so please paste as many images in here as you like! I'm using a smattering of them in the lecture today. I really appreciate you guys putting yourself out there and being open to crits and feedback!

                                            SVS Faculty Instructor
                                            www.leewhiteillustration.com

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