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    • Erichousel
      Erichousel last edited by

      Any crits from you guys are good crits. Always welcome.
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      • Katherine
        Katherine last edited by

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        Thanks Lee — I'm planning on spending a day on this soon to fix all the issues so a critique would be amazing!

        the site: katherinetyson.com
        instagram: instagram.com/katherinetysonart

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        • Erichousel
          Erichousel last edited by

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          • AngelinaKizz
            AngelinaKizz last edited by

            I would love a critique on Riley, even though it’s older, I would love to know how I could have done better with all the “disaster” in the garage, and the rendering.
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            www.evarartistry.com
            www.Instagram.com/evarartistry/

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            • Erichousel
              Erichousel last edited by

              Here's a few more I'd be interested in hearing about.

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              Christmas-Owl.jpg

              Binky Suit.jpg

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              • Jean Watson
                Jean Watson last edited by

                My first ever critique arena submission and second ever digital illustration! So tons to fix - possibly too much for the purpose! This one relates to this month's prompt “Kamari had come to the end of the road. Or was it a new beginning?” So I’ve gone for a young barn owl on his first flight. Had plans for a flight school scenario complete with pilot goggles, air Marshall signalling, flight path, flight school banner etc but in the end ditched that and went for something simpler and quieter.

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                • jvartandillustration
                  jvartandillustration last edited by

                  I just finished a piece, and would love a critique. Thank you!Disaster.JPG

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                  • kirsten-mcg
                    kirsten-mcg last edited by

                    This is an older one, but I would love to know how I could have done better with the storytelling and composition. Dragon Storm.jpeg

                    Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kirsten.mcgonigal.art/
                    Portfolio Site: www.kirstenmcgonigalart.com

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                    • Jeremy Ross
                      Jeremy Ross @Lee White last edited by

                      Por favor!
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                      https://www.instagram.com/jeremyrayross
                      https://www.jeremyrayross.com/
                      https://twitter.com/jeremyrayross
                      https://jeremyrayross.substack.com/

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                      • Sarah VanDam
                        Sarah VanDam last edited by Sarah VanDam

                        This is a page spread that I did for my BFA project. Seriously want to revisit the idea I had for this project at some point, but with a clean slate.

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                        https://sarahvandam.art/
                        Instagram: @sarahvandam.art and @artistsandbox.etsy

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                        • Bibi Senthi
                          Bibi Senthi last edited by

                          Yes please. Feel free to use my critique arena entry!

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                          Love the how to fix your art series. SO helpful!

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                          • ArtMelC
                            ArtMelC last edited by

                            Feel free to use my past entries 🙂
                            Melissa-Candrasaputra-Oct2022.jpg
                            Where+are+my+glasses+(1) (1).jpg
                            Melissa-candrasaputra-sep2022-v2.jpg

                            www.instagram.com/art.melc.illo/
                            www.artmelc.com
                            I write weekly on mondayblues.substack.com

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                            • F
                              Frogpunzel last edited by Frogpunzel

                              Here are a few, really enjoying Fix My Art!
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                              • ACPetullo
                                ACPetullo last edited by ACPetullo

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                                Fix away! ❤️‍🩹

                                www.acpillo.com

                                www.instagram.com/acp.illo/

                                ACP

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                                • MarcRobinson
                                  MarcRobinson last edited by

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                                  This is a book cover idea I had. Never done a cover like this before. Please fix away!

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                                  • Kim Rosenlof
                                    Kim Rosenlof last edited by

                                    It may be too late to do this, but just in case, here is mine.

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                                    Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kiminyrose/

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                                    • Norman Morana
                                      Norman Morana last edited by

                                      A couple areas I find difficult are dusk/night lighting and getting plenty of life in an illustration. I made this piece to work on those areas and I think there is plenty of room for improvement.

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                                      Onwards,

                                      Norman

                                      normanmoranaillustration.com
                                      instagram.com/norman_morana/

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                                      • Lee White
                                        Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                        These are all great! I see so many great things going on in all of them. The good thing about this lecture series we are doing is we are looking at very specific things in each image. So an image may be working overall, and just need help in one or two specific areas.

                                        So please remember that if you see one of your images and we say it could use improvement in a specific area. : )

                                        We still have at least 7 more of these lectures, so please paste as many images in here as you like! I'm using a smattering of them in the lecture today. I really appreciate you guys putting yourself out there and being open to crits and feedback!

                                        SVS Faculty Instructor
                                        www.leewhiteillustration.com

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                                        • Asyas_illos
                                          Asyas_illos @Lee White last edited by

                                          @Lee-White hi is there a link somewhere to attend or do we just hop over to YouTube at a certain time?

                                          Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
                                          www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
                                          https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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                                          • LisaF
                                            LisaF SVS Team SVS OG @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                            @Asyas_illos Hi! You can find it here: https://youtu.be/nM_WqCTeZ4o 😁

                                            Director of Sunshine and Rainbows
                                            lisa@svslearn.com

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