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    • Lee White
      Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG @lisachow last edited by

      Note: We may use your image as an example for different topics too. So SOME people will a full crit if selected for drawovers. Others will get mentioned in different areas where we are trying to make a point about one thing or another.

      SVS Faculty Instructor
      www.leewhiteillustration.com

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      • ?
        A Former User last edited by

        Would love any and all critiquing 🙂 I learn so much from everything SVS!!

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        • Lee White
          Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

          Thanks you guys! keep em' coming!

          SVS Faculty Instructor
          www.leewhiteillustration.com

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          • Erichousel
            Erichousel last edited by

            Any crits from you guys are good crits. Always welcome.
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            • Katherine
              Katherine last edited by

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              Thanks Lee — I'm planning on spending a day on this soon to fix all the issues so a critique would be amazing!

              the site: katherinetyson.com
              instagram: instagram.com/katherinetysonart

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              • Erichousel
                Erichousel last edited by

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                • AngelinaKizz
                  AngelinaKizz last edited by

                  I would love a critique on Riley, even though it’s older, I would love to know how I could have done better with all the “disaster” in the garage, and the rendering.
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                  www.evarartistry.com
                  www.Instagram.com/evarartistry/

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                  • Erichousel
                    Erichousel last edited by

                    Here's a few more I'd be interested in hearing about.

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                    Christmas-Owl.jpg

                    Binky Suit.jpg

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                    • Jean Watson
                      Jean Watson last edited by

                      My first ever critique arena submission and second ever digital illustration! So tons to fix - possibly too much for the purpose! This one relates to this month's prompt “Kamari had come to the end of the road. Or was it a new beginning?” So I’ve gone for a young barn owl on his first flight. Had plans for a flight school scenario complete with pilot goggles, air Marshall signalling, flight path, flight school banner etc but in the end ditched that and went for something simpler and quieter.

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                      • jvartandillustration
                        jvartandillustration last edited by

                        I just finished a piece, and would love a critique. Thank you!Disaster.JPG

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                        • kirsten-mcg
                          kirsten-mcg last edited by

                          This is an older one, but I would love to know how I could have done better with the storytelling and composition. Dragon Storm.jpeg

                          Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kirsten.mcgonigal.art/
                          Portfolio Site: www.kirstenmcgonigalart.com

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                          • Jeremy Ross
                            Jeremy Ross @Lee White last edited by

                            Por favor!
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                            https://www.instagram.com/jeremyrayross
                            https://www.jeremyrayross.com/
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                            https://jeremyrayross.substack.com/

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                            • Sarah VanDam
                              Sarah VanDam last edited by Sarah VanDam

                              This is a page spread that I did for my BFA project. Seriously want to revisit the idea I had for this project at some point, but with a clean slate.

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                              https://sarahvandam.art/
                              Instagram: @sarahvandam.art and @artistsandbox.etsy

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                              • Bibi Senthi
                                Bibi Senthi last edited by

                                Yes please. Feel free to use my critique arena entry!

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                                Love the how to fix your art series. SO helpful!

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                                • ArtMelC
                                  ArtMelC last edited by

                                  Feel free to use my past entries 🙂
                                  Melissa-Candrasaputra-Oct2022.jpg
                                  Where+are+my+glasses+(1) (1).jpg
                                  Melissa-candrasaputra-sep2022-v2.jpg

                                  www.instagram.com/art.melc.illo/
                                  www.artmelc.com
                                  I write weekly on mondayblues.substack.com

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                                    Frogpunzel last edited by Frogpunzel

                                    Here are a few, really enjoying Fix My Art!
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                                    • ACPetullo
                                      ACPetullo last edited by ACPetullo

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                                      Fix away! ❤️‍🩹

                                      www.acpillo.com

                                      www.instagram.com/acp.illo/

                                      ACP

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                                      • MarcRobinson
                                        MarcRobinson last edited by

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                                        This is a book cover idea I had. Never done a cover like this before. Please fix away!

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                                        • Kim Rosenlof
                                          Kim Rosenlof last edited by

                                          It may be too late to do this, but just in case, here is mine.

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                                          Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kiminyrose/

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                                          • Norman Morana
                                            Norman Morana last edited by

                                            A couple areas I find difficult are dusk/night lighting and getting plenty of life in an illustration. I made this piece to work on those areas and I think there is plenty of room for improvement.

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                                            Onwards,

                                            Norman

                                            normanmoranaillustration.com
                                            instagram.com/norman_morana/

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