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    • ArtMelC
      ArtMelC last edited by

      Feel free to use my past entries ๐Ÿ™‚
      Melissa-Candrasaputra-Oct2022.jpg
      Where+are+my+glasses+(1) (1).jpg
      Melissa-candrasaputra-sep2022-v2.jpg

      www.instagram.com/art.melc.illo/
      www.artmelc.com
      I write weekly on mondayblues.substack.com

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        Frogpunzel last edited by Frogpunzel

        Here are a few, really enjoying Fix My Art!
        glow wip done.jpg May- Storm.jpg Riley's Garage flattened 2.jpg Heather Case September 2022 Submission.jpg

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        • ACPetullo
          ACPetullo last edited by ACPetullo

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          Fix away! โค๏ธโ€๐Ÿฉน

          www.acpillo.com

          www.instagram.com/acp.illo/

          ACP

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          • MarcRobinson
            MarcRobinson last edited by

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            This is a book cover idea I had. Never done a cover like this before. Please fix away!

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            • Kim Rosenlof
              Kim Rosenlof last edited by

              It may be too late to do this, but just in case, here is mine.

              Kim_Rosenlof_July22.jpg

              Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kiminyrose/

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              • Norman Morana
                Norman Morana last edited by

                A couple areas I find difficult are dusk/night lighting and getting plenty of life in an illustration. I made this piece to work on those areas and I think there is plenty of room for improvement.

                NormanMorana_CritPiece.jpg

                Onwards,

                Norman

                normanmoranaillustration.com
                instagram.com/norman_morana/

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                • Lee White
                  Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

                  These are all great! I see so many great things going on in all of them. The good thing about this lecture series we are doing is we are looking at very specific things in each image. So an image may be working overall, and just need help in one or two specific areas.

                  So please remember that if you see one of your images and we say it could use improvement in a specific area. : )

                  We still have at least 7 more of these lectures, so please paste as many images in here as you like! I'm using a smattering of them in the lecture today. I really appreciate you guys putting yourself out there and being open to crits and feedback!

                  SVS Faculty Instructor
                  www.leewhiteillustration.com

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                  • Asyas_illos
                    Asyas_illos @Lee White last edited by

                    @Lee-White hi is there a link somewhere to attend or do we just hop over to YouTube at a certain time?

                    Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
                    www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
                    https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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                    • LisaF
                      LisaF SVS Team SVS OG @Asyas_illos last edited by

                      @Asyas_illos Hi! You can find it here: https://youtu.be/nM_WqCTeZ4o ๐Ÿ˜

                      Director of Sunshine and Rainbows
                      lisa@svslearn.com

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                      • Lee White
                        Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG @LisaF last edited by

                        Thanks everyone! Keep posting to this thread if you want to appear on future crits!

                        SVS Faculty Instructor
                        www.leewhiteillustration.com

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                        • ArtistErin
                          ArtistErin last edited by

                          Yes please!!! Working on a re-draw of the classic "The Velveteen Rabbit" and trying to develop compositions that are dynamic without being too busy... I'd love a critique! Thank you so much ๐Ÿ™‚

                          Wheelbarrow and Boy Final.jpg

                          Erin Richardson
                          instagram.com/erinrichardsondesigns21
                          www.erinrichardsondesigns.com

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                          • Gabby Correia
                            Gabby Correia last edited by

                            This one was from my very first prompt I did for SVS "Dragonfly"
                            dragonfly_web.jpg

                            https://linktr.ee/gabby_correia

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                            • Alexe53
                              Alexe53 last edited by

                              Darker Final (5).jpg

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                                JennyJones @Lee White last edited by

                                @Lee-White Here is one that I did of the poem โ€œThe Owl and the Pussy Catโ€. 527ECFF8-70A0-4C43-99AF-DC04DF7992A5.jpeg

                                When I made it I was satisfied and thought it would be a good portfolio piece. But now it seems like something is off. Help?

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                                  JennyJones last edited by

                                  Here is a piece I did using a collage technique. I drew some, photographed some physical items and imported them, and also used some digital layering tricks. My take on the three little pigs.

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                                  Thanks for offering the opportunity for scrutiny. I love the style of artists like Melissa Sweet and Emily Gravitt with their collage looking pieces. I am trying to get a similar look to my work.

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                                  • Kim Rosenlof
                                    Kim Rosenlof @JennyJones last edited by

                                    @JennyJones I really like this. Nice job with the collage. The expressions on the pigs are great.

                                    Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kiminyrose/

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                                    • von_Nimmermehr
                                      von_Nimmermehr last edited by von_Nimmermehr

                                      i don't know if i'm to late but i will leave this here.

                                      Julia_Nowak_fix_art.png

                                      Website: www.von-Nimmermehr.com
                                      Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/von_nimmermehr_illustration/

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                                      • Heather Boyd
                                        Heather Boyd @von_Nimmermehr last edited by

                                        @von_Nimmermehr This is so wonderful! Concept with ocean waves in the tree. Wow wow! I like how you think. ๐Ÿ™‚

                                        Instagram: www.instagram.com/heatherboyd.illustration/
                                        Website: https://heatherboydillustration.ca
                                        Shop: https://www.inprnt.com/search/products?q=HeatherBoydIllustration
                                        Ko-Fi: https://ko-fi.com/heatherboydillustration

                                        Be blessed,

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                                          JennyJones @Kim Rosenlof last edited by

                                          @Kim-Rosenlof , thanks. It was a new way to do things for me. It was a first and it took forever. But I learned a lot. Next time will be a little bit quickerโ€ฆI hope.

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                                          • von_Nimmermehr
                                            von_Nimmermehr @Heather Boyd last edited by

                                            @Heather-Boyd Thank you so much ๐Ÿ™‚

                                            Website: www.von-Nimmermehr.com
                                            Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/von_nimmermehr_illustration/

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