NEED ART FOR SVS YOUTUBE CRITS!

[Norman Morana]

A couple areas I find difficult are dusk/night lighting and getting plenty of life in an illustration. I made this piece to work on those areas and I think there is plenty of room for improvement.

[Lee White]

These are all great! I see so many great things going on in all of them. The good thing about this lecture series we are doing is we are looking at very specific things in each image. So an image may be working overall, and just need help in one or two specific areas.

So please remember that if you see one of your images and we say it could use improvement in a specific area. : )

We still have at least 7 more of these lectures, so please paste as many images in here as you like! I'm using a smattering of them in the lecture today. I really appreciate you guys putting yourself out there and being open to crits and feedback!

[Asyas_illos]

@Lee-White hi is there a link somewhere to attend or do we just hop over to YouTube at a certain time?

[LisaF]

@Asyas_illos Hi! You can find it here: https://youtu.be/nM_WqCTeZ4o

[Lee White]

Thanks everyone! Keep posting to this thread if you want to appear on future crits!

[ArtistErin]

Yes please!!! Working on a re-draw of the classic "The Velveteen Rabbit" and trying to develop compositions that are dynamic without being too busy... I'd love a critique! Thank you so much

[Gabby Correia]

This one was from my very first prompt I did for SVS "Dragonfly"

[Alexe53]

[JennyJones]

@Lee-White Here is one that I did of the poem “The Owl and the Pussy Cat”.

When I made it I was satisfied and thought it would be a good portfolio piece. But now it seems like something is off. Help?

[JennyJones]

Here is a piece I did using a collage technique. I drew some, photographed some physical items and imported them, and also used some digital layering tricks. My take on the three little pigs.

Thanks for offering the opportunity for scrutiny. I love the style of artists like Melissa Sweet and Emily Gravitt with their collage looking pieces. I am trying to get a similar look to my work.

[Kim Rosenlof]

@JennyJones I really like this. Nice job with the collage. The expressions on the pigs are great.

[von_Nimmermehr]

i don't know if i'm to late but i will leave this here.

[Heather Boyd]

@von_Nimmermehr This is so wonderful! Concept with ocean waves in the tree. Wow wow! I like how you think.

[JennyJones]

@Kim-Rosenlof , thanks. It was a new way to do things for me. It was a first and it took forever. But I learned a lot. Next time will be a little bit quicker…I hope.

[von_Nimmermehr]

@Heather-Boyd Thank you so much

[KatrinaF]

@Lee-White
Hey Lee! Katrina here. I'd love to get some feed back on this piece. Thx

[Maureen*Henry*Artist]

@Lee-White

would love a critique

[kayleenartlover]

@Lee-White
I am planning on redrawing this piece since it is nearly a year old. I would love to get a critique on it before I recreate it.

[brettb_draws]

@Lee-White @Jake-Parker @Will-Terry
I'd love to get your feedback on this one that I did earlier in the year! I was really happy with the concept and rendering but feel that the storytelling, and lighting could have been improved. I believe this was for the tiger prompt.

[Lee White]

We are doing a new episode of How to fix Your Art today so I wanted to bump this thread up! Keep submitting as we are going through all of these to find the ones to use for each episode. : )