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    • Alexe53
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        JennyJones @Lee White last edited by

        @Lee-White Here is one that I did of the poem “The Owl and the Pussy Cat”. 527ECFF8-70A0-4C43-99AF-DC04DF7992A5.jpeg

        When I made it I was satisfied and thought it would be a good portfolio piece. But now it seems like something is off. Help?

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          JennyJones last edited by

          Here is a piece I did using a collage technique. I drew some, photographed some physical items and imported them, and also used some digital layering tricks. My take on the three little pigs.

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          Thanks for offering the opportunity for scrutiny. I love the style of artists like Melissa Sweet and Emily Gravitt with their collage looking pieces. I am trying to get a similar look to my work.

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          • Kim Rosenlof
            Kim Rosenlof @JennyJones last edited by

            @JennyJones I really like this. Nice job with the collage. The expressions on the pigs are great.

            Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kiminyrose/

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            • von_Nimmermehr
              von_Nimmermehr last edited by von_Nimmermehr

              i don't know if i'm to late but i will leave this here.

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              Website: www.von-Nimmermehr.com
              Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/von_nimmermehr_illustration/

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              • Heather Boyd
                Heather Boyd @von_Nimmermehr last edited by

                @von_Nimmermehr This is so wonderful! Concept with ocean waves in the tree. Wow wow! I like how you think. 🙂

                Instagram: www.instagram.com/heatherboyd.illustration/
                Website: https://heatherboydillustration.ca
                Shop: https://www.inprnt.com/search/products?q=HeatherBoydIllustration
                Ko-Fi: https://ko-fi.com/heatherboydillustration

                Be blessed,

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                  JennyJones @Kim Rosenlof last edited by

                  @Kim-Rosenlof , thanks. It was a new way to do things for me. It was a first and it took forever. But I learned a lot. Next time will be a little bit quicker…I hope.

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                  • von_Nimmermehr
                    von_Nimmermehr @Heather Boyd last edited by

                    @Heather-Boyd Thank you so much 🙂

                    Website: www.von-Nimmermehr.com
                    Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/von_nimmermehr_illustration/

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                    • KatrinaF
                      KatrinaF @Lee White last edited by

                      @Lee-White
                      Hey Lee! Katrina here. I'd love to get some feed back on this piece. Thx

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                      • Maureen*Henry*Artist
                        Maureen*Henry*Artist @Lee White last edited by

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                        would love a critique

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                        • kayleenartlover
                          kayleenartlover @Lee White last edited by

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                          I am planning on redrawing this piece since it is nearly a year old. I would love to get a critique on it before I recreate it.

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                          • brettb_draws
                            brettb_draws last edited by

                            @Lee-White @Jake-Parker @Will-Terry
                            I'd love to get your feedback on this one that I did earlier in the year! I was really happy with the concept and rendering but feel that the storytelling, and lighting could have been improved. I believe this was for the tiger prompt.

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                            • Lee White
                              Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

                              We are doing a new episode of How to fix Your Art today so I wanted to bump this thread up! Keep submitting as we are going through all of these to find the ones to use for each episode. : )

                              SVS Faculty Instructor
                              www.leewhiteillustration.com

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                                • Asyas_illos
                                  Asyas_illos last edited by

                                  F88A47EF-96A3-41E5-9E30-AFA6BBA906D6.jpeg I’ve been struggling with this one!

                                  Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
                                  www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
                                  https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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                                  • Tom Harshberger
                                    Tom Harshberger last edited by

                                    I would love some advice on how to control the texture to draw the eye in without characters looking to clean in contrast. Or any advice really 🙂

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                                    instagram.com/tomharshberger.art

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                                    • kayleenartlover
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                                        • Erichousel
                                          Erichousel @Lee White last edited by

                                          @Lee-White @Jake-Parker I was happy to see Jake critique one of my illustrations in the #4 video on characters. I loved the info and found it very useful. Thanks guys!

                                          Eric Housel

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                                          • brettb_draws
                                            brettb_draws @Erichousel last edited by

                                            Does anyone know where I can view the videos? It's says they're private on YouTube

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