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Advice please: The rabbit image has finally made progress :D

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  • randarrington
    randarrington @willicreate last edited by 14 Feb 2023, 22:26

    @willicreate Good insight on the environment details and treatment. I'll address that in the final piece. Thank you for that.

    If you look at the first image...the coat is slightly behind the tree. (I didn't take the time with the edits to worry about it) It's a little bit of tangent and I could pull that left tree in closing in the space which would force the coat to appear behind the tree and helping with the environment looking more integrated. Thank you for that too 😃

    I felt it was too dark as well. Part of the problem is Procreate and how it handles color...it came over the the MacBook really dark. So I did adjust that to be closer to what I was seeing on the iPad. Still feels darker to me than the original source. I'll certainly keep that in mind when doing the final.

    Thank you so much!!!!! You've been very insightful.

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      randarrington @Chantal Goetheer last edited by 14 Feb 2023, 22:29

      @Chantal-Goetheer I may do a quick version using more shapes on that tree just to see. I feel like I'm entirely too anal LOL.

      The arm fade is intentional. I love lost shape and edge. I'd really like to have pushed that further but...I'm afraid it would have made it tougher to read. Especially since this is utterly fictional and I don't have any reality to leverage for the shapes and gestures.

      Thank you so much for you input!!!!! Great insights!!!!

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        randarrington @Jeremy Ross last edited by 14 Feb 2023, 22:30

        @Jeremy-Ross Thank you Jeremy!!!! I'm getting anxious to drop some paint 😃

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